America The Broken

America The Broken

“O beautiful for spacious skies”
yet marred by all it’s leaders lies.
See it’s “amber waves of grain”
beneath them hidden is a stain

I pause  “For purple mountain majesties”
yet that’s not all that my heart sees
There “above the fruited plain”
Souls cry for justice in their pain.

“America, America
God Shed his grace on thee”
His grace for all people, 
not just those white like me

“Till souls wax fair as earth and air”
and there is justice everywhere 
We can’t stay silent amidst despair
for many don’t receive their share.

I pray for healing across your land
“And music hearted sea”
That differences can be embraced
so that your nation is truly free

“O beautiful for pilgrim feet”
where all are blessed with food to eat
“Whose stern impassioned stress”
leads to more instead of less

“A thoroughfare, for freedom beat”
where hearts, souls and minds meet
“Across the wilderness” and city streets
Determined to march to a different beat

“America, America
God mend thy every flaw
Confirm thy soul in self control
Thy liberty in law”

“O beautiful for heroes proved”
once on knees for those they loved
Men who promised to serve and protect, their true duty they neglect.

So come together one and all
“In liberating strife”
Bring passion, signs, voices strong
no need for brick or knife

“Who more than self, their country loved and mercy more than life”
will do their best to change the tides
and reduce their brother’s strife

“America, America
May God thy gold refine
Till all success be nobleness 
and every gain divine”

“Oh beautiful for patriot dream”
Yet many aren’t blessed it seems
Them “that sees beyond the years”
pray for days that bring joyful tears

“Thine alabaster cities gleam”
can embrace an ebony dream
Once “Undimmed by human tears”
we’ll be able to see beyond our fears.   
 
“America, America
God shed his grace on thee
And crown thy good for brotherhood
From sea to shining sea.”

“America the Beautiful” is the Foundation of this piece. I was inspired by Daniel Turner’s Blog of the same name.

The sentiments of Katherine Lee Bate’s poem are Beautiful. The lines from her poem are in quotations. Sadly not all of your nation’s people share in this dream. Abraham Lincoln in 1858 gave a speech about “A house Divided against itself cannot stand.” to 1000 Republican delegates. It would be wise to ponder these words that were originally spoken by Jesus.

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Date: 12/18/2024 10:40:00 AM
I 'm seeing your creativity. But also seeing your picture of the truth. Looking forward for Christmas. Yey! But soon after that The Rapture. Any thing but what I see comming.
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Date: 12/14/2024 2:58:00 PM
It's a scary world over here, with the nut-bag in Russia and the nut-bag in S. Korea and all the other nut-bags around the globe, it's a miracle mankind is still here. Good write, Richard. Merry Christmas to you and your family! Charlie
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Date: 11/4/2024 12:09:00 PM
Great poem Richard. I worry for the future as the UK tends to follow US traits five years down the line. Sadly there will be unrest whatever happens after tomorrow. I can’t help thinking that whoever wins the people’s votes in the short term will eventually lose them in the long term. Your poem is worth re-reads. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/5/2024 3:51:00 PM
You guys need to reelect Boris. Then we'll both have the worst hair leaders in the world
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2024 8:18:00 PM
Thanks for giving my poem a read. These are strange times.
Date: 11/3/2024 7:31:00 AM
Indeed what an awesome write enjoyed reading your work many blessings
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2024 8:19:00 PM
Much appreciated.
Date: 10/20/2024 12:10:00 PM
The words of 'The Word' the only King of all things.' Respectful prayers for all there in a Current reality i do not want to see.'
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2024 6:20:00 AM
We are living in dangerous times.
Date: 9/15/2024 5:02:00 AM
Hi Richard, i've just come across your magnificent poem. Yes indeed, I think the world are aligned with your sentiments, not only to heal America but the rest of the World that has gone mad. Hugs Maria
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2024 9:10:00 AM
Unfortunately it does feel like the world has gone mad. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 8/21/2024 12:43:00 PM
Many gave their lives for America to be free and yet it is so divided, it really needs someone to bind everyone together and make it the country it once was. God Bless America. A well written verse Richard. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/21/2024 1:39:00 PM
I am well, enjoying my recent retirement, Thanks for your visit.
Date: 8/21/2024 11:40:00 AM
America, and all nations of the world, are against God's king and in the hands of this world's invisible ruler, Satan. Their time left in power has been reduced Rick - Psalm ch 2; Matthew 4:8-10; Revelation ch 19. Your lament is loud and clear
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/21/2024 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Tom. :0)
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