Ambivalence

Atmosphere of Spring
Aura of cold, powdered snow
Ambivalence still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 6:34 AM
you've captured the feeling
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Another one. Wow, sAra, you did well in RAul's contests I am finally seeing today!
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February 20, 2010 at 2:02 AM
Congratulations Sara on your placement in Raul Moreno’s “Morning Ambiance” contest. Very good haiku. Keep your poetic skills flowing. Sincerely, Dane Ann
Muzzey Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful Haiku and your win, well deserved. Caryl
Richards Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 8:27 AM
A lovely haiku, and a well deserved win, Sara. Congratulations! ~ Carrie
Owens Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your win...Beautiful Haiku Sara...enjoyed...Marty
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest (Morning Ambiance) Sara. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 4:34 AM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful description of the photo with your words and a wonderful win for a wonderful poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Moreno Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:48 PM
Sara, congrats in your placement in my contest...Raul
Fraser Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Wonderful Haiku Sara, lovely scene captured in your words >> James
Culverhouse Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 6:02 AM
what's up? not spring.
Esquire Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 7:18 PM
Dear Sara, LOVE the Alliteration Haiku I can feel Spring on it's way ( Soon I Hope ) YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
Chircop Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:59 PM
I CAN FEEL IT IN THE AIR...BEAUTIFUL..Charma
Chachere Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Beautiful Atomoshpere, Aura, & Ambivalence! -Always&Forever LYnette
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Lovely haiku. LThank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
Strand Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 1:26 AM
Thats the trouble with the weather Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 7:41 PM
A treat of Haiku from your gifted pen.. am going to hang up my shovel soon as if any more snow arrives it will be TOO much... your Haiku gives hope of Spring to come.. enjoyed this creative poem..luv.. Linda-Marie
Haick Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Yes, ..."Ambivalence still"...in this atmosphere of spring! Thanks for your kind comments left for me, Sara. Peace, Audrey
Beam Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 1:03 PM
thank you and you also really enjoy this form
Knop Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Great Haiku, Sara! We are now all waiting finally for spring to come!..Keep on writing!..Gert
Freeman Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Amen to this Sara. Great comparison! Peckerwood is just a nice slang word we use in Arkansas, to describe someone who is always pulling jokes on others. Ofcourse nice jokes! Smile! Sincere Agape, Moses
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February 16, 2010 at 8:34 AM
today has been full of many wonderful haiku verse... You have added another beauty... Good job Sara....:-}...:JP]
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 6:18 AM
Thanks for the challenge on this one. Spring is in the air but not. Sara
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