Ambiance

Amongst ardent waters
Abloom by swollen gales
Amorphous starlights shine
And sprinkle pearl kisses
Anchored by shadow tides
Along the ample seas
Aligning hearts below


August 10, 2016
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Kimathi Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:56 AM
Congrats Sam, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Thanks, Teddy :)
Merryman Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Creative word usage and beautiful imagery! Sam, congrats on your well written Pleiades! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Thank you, Kim-- this was a new style for me and I enjoyed penning this piece. I appreciate the placement and I look forward to your future prompts. Have a wonderful night :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Very lovely Sam! Congratulations on your high placement! Most deserving! : ) 7
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thank you kindly, Connie-- very nice of you to say. Have a great night :)
Hamilton Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Back with my congrats, thought this one was the winner, but did well anyway.
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:17 PM
It's quite alright, I enjoyed the write ;) Thanks, John, for the confidence and kind remarks-- have a great night my friend.
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Many congrats Sam-) hugs Jan xx
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Many thanks, Jan :)
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:47 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poems, Sam ! - Great !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise-- very kind of you to say :) Have a great day!
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:06 AM
a beautiful one. Congrats for your win.
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Andrea-- I appreciate your kind remarks :)
Y. Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
Jameson Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Thank you, Alexis :)
DiMino Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Beautiful imagery!
Jameson Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Thank you, Joe-- glad you enjoyed the read!
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Very nice Sam, "amorphous starlights shine" you really have way with words, should do well in the contest!
Jameson Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, John-- I do enjoy artful language, and verse writing is such a powerful source of creativity for it. I see your newest prompt up-- I hope to get a piece together for it however I'll be on short holiday so I might miss out, best of luck for all involved. Cheers, John-- have a great weekend!
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