John Gondolf Poet Quintain (English)

Ambiance

The ambiance of her soft smile was felt
   by everyone as she walked in the room,
and somewhere deep within his mind there dwelt
warm thoughts of April meadows lush with bloom
      as air was sweet with scent of her perfume.

The ambiance he felt with her soft touch
   caused thoughts to stir so deep within his mind;
the possibilities of love and such,
and all the tender dreams he longed to find,
      he felt as heaven’s bodies seemed aligned.

The ambiance he heard in her soft voice
   as whispered words so gently touched his soul,
for him it seemed there was no other choice.
The feelings felt with nature’s soft cajole
      and deep within then nature took control.

The ambiance of love within her heart
   he felt with every subtle move she made,
revealing her desires right from the start;
and deep within he knew her thoughts conveyed,
      they soon would share a lover’s promenade.


May 11, 2024

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Mystic Rose Rose May 26, 2024 at 6:46 PM This is a perfect example of a well written English quintain John, much enjoyed gl in the contest John Gondolf May 26, 2024 at 8:38 PM Thank you for your wonderful comment and visit, Vi, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole May 11, 2024 at 8:30 PM ' The ambiance of her soft smile, her soft touch, her soft voice; ' and the ' love within her heart. ' She sounds so dreamy and romantic. Your thoughts are beautiful, my sweet friend. You've created a masterpiece. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf May 12, 2024 at 5:54 AM Thank you my dear friend. Sometimes that special person just gives you all these wonderful feelings and it is magical. Hugs, John