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Constance's Ten Beautiful Lines Contest      April 9, 2025

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"A new relationship is like a seed that we plant and nurture ~ it grows into something beautiful and everlasting." ~ Jodi Picoult When the veins of indigo thoughts in my broken heart were gently touched by the golden glow within your soul we blended together in a splendid hue of luminous sheen. Upon love's palette, we are a soft shade of verdant green awash in a crimson rouge of blush when I first felt the rush of romance ignite my senses on our first night together. So, I'll write what's in my heart, and the verse would start with white rose petals of rhymes about the many times I felt blue, wishing you'd recognized what was in my eyes. Now, they shine with love brighter than amber rays of the sun.

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Date: 4/17/2025 8:25:00 AM
Lin, seems as though love and affection have a power to heal and then make us feel really happy and complete. I always like to think about the blue side of the spectrum and how lucky we are to slide back toward the center. This is beautifully put in your poem.
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Date: 4/13/2025 7:40:00 PM
Listened to the poem! Oh! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/13/2025 10:30:00 AM
- When love arises everything will shine... a beautiful poem, Lin :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/13/2025 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your romantic write, quote and picture. We must write what's in our heart. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/13/2025 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 4/13/2025 7:05:00 AM
Lin, so beautifully written and I love that you added the audio. You have a soothing voice. Congratulations on your win.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/13/2025 7:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tania.
Date: 4/10/2025 9:10:00 PM
Very romantic verse Lin, your verse is so soothing, I start to feel sleepy. Lol Finally back on line, just changed Internet provider, must have rebooted ten times yesterday grrr. Internet seems OK now but no phone line yet. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/12/2025 4:44:00 AM
;-)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/11/2025 1:30:00 AM
Lol, not at all Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/11/2025 12:41:00 AM
So, I bore you and put you to sleep? Lol. I couldn’t psss that up. Sorry about your internet, Tom.
Date: 4/9/2025 2:51:00 PM
so lovely to hear your voice Lin, it really adds a different dimension to the poem and i think Constance will love this little beauty! hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/9/2025 3:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, chick. I think it’s fun to add but watch out if I ever add audio to a dump on Trump!
Date: 4/9/2025 2:25:00 PM
Dear linnersz, You have a beautiful lovely voice and you read very well your well woven words, everything about the poem and the picture and your reading is all stunning, Before i go to sleep its nice to listen to your soothing poem: sara jama also just posted her spoken word for EI contest. I love how youv used such descriptive diction to paint imagery here and the seamless flow of your lines! Pleasure reading you today, sending you light always!
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Date: 4/9/2025 2:30:00 PM
My newfound friend, you are always so kind with your detailed comments. I've been experimenting with audio, and I've never liked the way I sound, but Dilly got me interested in attaching it, and I DO think it adds to the poem's intention. So... thank you so very much and have a restful night. Hugs for you. Bon nuit!
Date: 4/9/2025 11:57:00 AM
Lin, I'm always amazed by descriptions of how love can make us feel so beautifully and so deeply. You do have a way with this topic! The words just entwine the thought and body of love itself.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/9/2025 12:24:00 PM
Maybe my heart is too visible as it puts itself out there on my sleeve. Thanks very much, Duke.
Date: 4/9/2025 9:04:00 AM
Your reading enhances your beautiful words Lin, wonderful x
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/9/2025 9:58:00 AM
Thanks for your gracious comments, Dilly.

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