Tim Smith Poet Romanticism

Amazing Views

Beyond the golden horizon she dwells 
lightening up more than just a dream 
shadows teasingly move 
along with the mountains 
playing out tantalizing possibilities 
where into my vision she'll lie 

Darkness descends with 
submissive amends 
love just a heartbeat away 
passions entwined 
ethereal oils float by  long 
before the dewdrops subside

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Susan Ashley August 26, 2017 at 9:14 PM Hi Tim, Amazing Views is amazingly beautiful! Your second stanza is poetic blissfulness :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 2, 2017 at 10:24 PM Ohhhh soft and lovely Tim. I especially love your second stanza. ; )

Arthur Vaso August 2, 2017 at 9:10 PM The form says it all! Amazing Tim!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2017 at 1:55 PM - A beautiful poem, Tim .... really beautiful - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 2, 2017 at 4:59 AM Great view from here my friend...god bless...^WW^

Carol B. August 1, 2017 at 5:16 PM Tim, what a spectacular view you have weaved with this poem. :). Very romantic piece!

Lin Lane August 1, 2017 at 12:33 PM Love and submission...much more than a dream, Tim. Mmm mmm good.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 1, 2017 at 10:32 AM Your romantic penning is among the best Tim, thoroughly enjoyed :) xomo!

Heidi Sands August 1, 2017 at 10:26 AM So beautiful and peaceful Tim ! :)

Gary Bateman August 1, 2017 at 9:38 AM Hello Tim, I enjoyed your "Romanticism" write here very much -- all with power, passion, and a sense of deep emotion. Superb!! A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary