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Amazing Views

Beyond the golden horizon she dwells lightening up more than just a dream shadows teasingly move along with the mountains playing out tantalizing possibilities where into my vision she'll lie Darkness descends with submissive amends love just a heartbeat away passions entwined ethereal oils float by long before the dewdrops subside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 9:14:00 PM
Hi Tim, Amazing Views is amazingly beautiful! Your second stanza is poetic blissfulness :)
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Date: 8/2/2017 10:24:00 PM
Ohhhh soft and lovely Tim. I especially love your second stanza. ; )
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:10:00 PM
The form says it all! Amazing Tim!
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Date: 8/2/2017 1:55:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Tim .... really beautiful - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2017 4:59:00 AM
Great view from here my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/1/2017 5:16:00 PM
Tim, what a spectacular view you have weaved with this poem. :). Very romantic piece!
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Date: 8/1/2017 12:33:00 PM
Love and submission...much more than a dream, Tim. Mmm mmm good.
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Date: 8/1/2017 10:32:00 AM
Your romantic penning is among the best Tim, thoroughly enjoyed :) xomo!
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Date: 8/1/2017 10:26:00 AM
So beautiful and peaceful Tim ! :)
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Date: 8/1/2017 9:38:00 AM
Hello Tim, I enjoyed your "Romanticism" write here very much -- all with power, passion, and a sense of deep emotion. Superb!! A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary
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