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I couldn't avert my gaze off the sublime sunset, I was utterly dazzled by the magnanimous deed, I could follow the artist's pastel-colored hands bet, And mother's deep love, after she has relaid seed. I was utterly dazzled by the magnanimous deed, I dimly bar my eyes as I could feel tears stacking, And mother's deep love, after she has relaid seed, What has led people to be so prone to cracking? I dimly bar my eyes as I could feel tears stacking, We need to quit providing pretexts and chafe outside, What has led people to be so prone to cracking? Why don't we just cusp the call so no again sighed? We need to quit providing pretexts and chafe outside, Why are we so concerned around being alone? Why don't we just cusp the call so no again sighed? As we have forgotten our mother's beating tone. Why are we so concerned around being alone? She drew the sky each night as cogitation of you, As we have forgotten our mother's beating tone, May we always cherish Mother Nature's hues? She drew the sky each night as cogitation of you, I could follow the artist's pastel-colored hands bet, May we always cherish Mother Nature's hues? I Couldn't avert my gaze off the sublime sunset.
Written: July 08, 2022

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Date: 7/10/2022 9:01:00 AM
On a clear day sunset is a heavenly spectacle from which we can't avert our eyes. Mother Nature provides us with such lovely scenes. But are we grateful to her or treat her the way we should? Never.... ! Much enjoyed this pantoum
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Date: 7/8/2022 1:20:00 PM
Sotto, I can’t avert my gaze off the sublime sunset either, it’s nature at its best. A lovely poem… Belle
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Date: 7/8/2022 1:08:00 PM
A beautiful ode to nature in all its delight my friend.
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Date: 7/8/2022 12:41:00 PM
- No painting is painted more beautiful than nature itself, I enjoy it every day ... because I live in the middle of all this beauty - A beautiful poem, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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