Amazing Grace

Daisy skirts
Swinging in church
Shouting "Hallelujah Amen"
Feeling the Holy Ghost
Doors open
You repent.
Frog in your throat
The spirit took over.
You fell to your knees.
Tears formed and rolled down cheeks.
Not anyone could believe the salvation they seen.
The doves were released.
Your life manifested them.

"Amazing grace, how sweet thou are to save a wretch like me."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Delaney Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 4:26 PM
Hi Verlena: a moving and beautiful poem.... it captures the spirit of this moment. Hugs, SuZ
Walker  Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Thanks Suz-D. Verlena
Horn Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Oh, all the feeling. It was just like we were there with you. The soft tears clung to your face as you shouted for joy having Jesus in your life and in your every breath you took. Doves of peace flew so gently out of your hands. Salvation went through your very soul and body refreshing it and soothing it so very much. Rejoice and again I say rejoice to the great poem of yours that I have just read. Jim Horn
Walker  Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Thanks for much ado about nothing... I truly enjoyed reading your comments on Amazing Grace. Dark Sunshine
Johnson Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 9:07 AM
The steeple stands tall for all. Deep within the chambers of the heart is where salvation lye's. Those who search know the church of Jesus Christ. Peace. :)
Walker  Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Those who desire salvation will seek what you speak of. Thanks for the positive feedback. Dark Sunshine
Bugeja Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 12:25 AM
Amen
Walker  Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Unto God!
Beam Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 9:46 PM
I'll fly away O' Glory Thanks for sharing I enjoyed
Walker  Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Thanks for the positive feedback John. Much more poetry to come... Dark Sunshine
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