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Amazing Face

Lens enhanced perception Sands your face with precision Rallying rows of eyelash perfection Brush my conscience, bless my vision 29th August 2020 For : Gregory R. Bardon Contest : Rithimus Four Lines - 5 Original poem of extract is 'Mother Seen Embroidered' Written June 2020.

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John Hamilton

Date: 9/21/2020 7:51:00 AM

What a wonderful concept how beauty blesses the vision, nice write and win!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/21/2020 7:21:00 AM

Descriptive, lovely poem, Sigrid. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/20/2020 5:27:00 PM

Such musical four lines, Sigrid!! Congratulations on your great win!!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/21/2020 2:24:00 AM

Elaine George

Date: 9/20/2020 4:30:00 PM

Beautiful 4 Lines, Sigrid. Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/21/2020 2:25:00 AM

Ta, Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 2:14:00 PM

I like the part you chose from a poem called "mother seen Embroidered" Both the original and the title of this portion of the orginal have awesome titles. Great imagery, Sigrid. Congrats.

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/21/2020 2:25:00 AM

Thank you very much, Andrea. Congrats for your super Top Spot

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/20/2020 9:38:00 AM

Sometimes those "precision" lens, either real or poetic, do bring "perfection" into focus, my friend. Congratulations on your win and your blessed "vision" of understanding!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/21/2020 2:31:00 AM

Wow, thanks, Sam. Just wrote it from literal standpoint, but yes, I should find my way to the emotional end of vision (poetry helps)!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/30/2020 7:50:00 PM

This does sound absolutely fantabulous... And reaches such depths... Multiple possible meanings in every line... It's a WOW in my book. Thanks, Gershon

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/6/2020 8:38:00 PM

... Just read. Aww, thank you. Bit same same to me! Ta, Gershon.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/29/2020 3:20:00 PM

Your lines are done to perfection my friend poet, thanks for sharing and gl in the contest,

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/29/2020 5:26:00 PM

No worries, Pixie. I have virtually no exact rhyme anywhere, and still I question what denotes it. Thanks for stopping by!

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 4:17:00 AM

Sounds great Sigrid...

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/29/2020 5:24:00 PM

Thanks, Silent One. Sounds a bit tongue twisty!