Sigrid Ermine Poet Rhyme

Amazing Face

Lens enhanced perception 
                                    Sands your face with precision 
                                Rallying rows of eyelash perfection 
                              Brush my conscience, bless my vision




            29th August 2020
      For : Gregory R. Bardon
 Contest : Rithimus Four Lines - 5

Original poem of extract is  'Mother Seen Embroidered' 
                                                      Written June 2020.

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John Hamilton September 21, 2020 at 7:51 AM What a wonderful concept how beauty blesses the vision, nice write and win!

Janice Canerdy September 21, 2020 at 7:21 AM Descriptive, lovely poem, Sigrid. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Newton Ranaweera September 20, 2020 at 5:27 PM Such musical four lines, Sigrid!! Congratulations on your great win!! Sigrid Ermine September 21, 2020 at 2:24 AM Ta

Elaine George September 20, 2020 at 4:30 PM Beautiful 4 Lines, Sigrid. Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine Sigrid Ermine September 21, 2020 at 2:25 AM Ta, Elaine

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 2:14 PM I like the part you chose from a poem called "mother seen Embroidered" Both the original and the title of this portion of the orginal have awesome titles. Great imagery, Sigrid. Congrats. Sigrid Ermine September 21, 2020 at 2:25 AM Thank you very much, Andrea. Congrats for your super Top Spot

Sam Kauffman September 20, 2020 at 9:38 AM Sometimes those "precision" lens, either real or poetic, do bring "perfection" into focus, my friend. Congratulations on your win and your blessed "vision" of understanding! Sigrid Ermine September 21, 2020 at 2:31 AM Wow, thanks, Sam. Just wrote it from literal standpoint, but yes, I should find my way to the emotional end of vision (poetry helps)!

Gershon Wolf August 30, 2020 at 7:50 PM This does sound absolutely fantabulous... And reaches such depths... Multiple possible meanings in every line... It's a WOW in my book. Thanks, Gershon Sigrid Ermine September 6, 2020 at 8:38 PM ... Just read. Aww, thank you. Bit same same to me! Ta, Gershon.

Mystic Rose Rose August 29, 2020 at 3:20 PM Your lines are done to perfection my friend poet, thanks for sharing and gl in the contest, Sigrid Ermine August 29, 2020 at 5:26 PM No worries, Pixie. I have virtually no exact rhyme anywhere, and still I question what denotes it. Thanks for stopping by!

Silent One August 29, 2020 at 4:17 AM Sounds great Sigrid... Sigrid Ermine August 29, 2020 at 5:24 PM Thanks, Silent One. Sounds a bit tongue twisty!