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Amazing

you stole my heart away like a dying patient
 
you stole that first kiss and you had my heart racing
 
you stole my blue sweater i stood there half naked
 
you grinned and whispered in my ear
 
this was all makeshift
 
you lay your hand on my shoulder the softest of touches
 
while in the mirror lipstick and blushes
 
I carry you and mess up your hair on the bed
 
and look into your eyes  knowing i can do this everyday of my life 
 
again and again.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 9:37:00 AM
Sensual, romantic, playful, emotional. I like the tempo, fun to read. I like this very much!
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Khalid Afolabi
Date: 7/14/2011 10:00:00 AM
:) thanks i really appreciate that
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Khalid Afolabi
Date: 7/14/2011 10:00:00 AM
:) thanks i really appreciate that

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