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you stole my heart away like a dying patient you stole that first kiss and you had my heart racing you stole my blue sweater i stood there half naked you grinned and whispered in my ear this was all makeshift you lay your hand on my shoulder the softest of touches while in the mirror lipstick and blushes I carry you and mess up your hair on the bed and look into your eyes knowing i can do this everyday of my life again and again.....

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Date: 7/14/2011 9:37:00 AM
Sensual, romantic, playful, emotional. I like the tempo, fun to read. I like this very much!
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Khalid Afolabi
Date: 7/14/2011 10:00:00 AM
:) thanks i really appreciate that
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Khalid Afolabi
Date: 7/14/2011 10:00:00 AM
:) thanks i really appreciate that

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