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Amaranthine

Amaranthine ...

A word that goes on ... and on

An endless maelstrom of matter, dark, seething ...

A sea of suns, heaven-ward, burning ...

Grains of sand, unique, precious ... infinite!

Countless snow crystals, drifting ... not ONE the same!

Atoms in the heart of a star - ceaseless!

Photons in a single beam of moonlight, perpetual ...

But the most lasting of all ... undying, immortal ...

Love ... truly, purely, amaranthine!



* FIRST PLACE in the "Early December Standard" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor. *

* EIGHTH PLACE in the "Word Vision" Poetry Contest, Vermillion Scythe, Sponsor. *
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Loughman Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Excellent poem! Congratulations On your win!
Barden Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:48 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Donna - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :-) <3
May Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Great write and win Gregory..Congrats
Barden Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:48 PM
Very kind of you, Joseph ... thanks so much! :-)
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Congrats on your win, Gregory!
Barden Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Thank you muchly, Agnes! ;-) <3
Roper Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Barden Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, I greatly appreciate it! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Wow, for me it's one of the top entries. Love this, Gregory. Congrats on the winner list.
Barden Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea - very pleased you enjoyed this one! :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Very cool! Congrats.
Barden Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Thank you so much, Richard! :-)
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Wonderful write as per usual Greg, touches all the senses, great imagery, will do well in the contest, no doubt!
Barden Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Very kind of you to say so, John, thank you very much!
Gauthier Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Beautiful imagery. Fabulous, Gregory.
Barden Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Thank you very kindly, Line, I'm so pleased you liked it! :-) <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 7:57 AM
An ethereal pen Greg! My best to you in the contest :) much love! xomo
Barden Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 2:23 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen - blessings to you, Friend! <3
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