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- Amanita Muscaria -

White dots on the hat
                                  Small cabins where fairies live
                                           Fairytale symbol
                                        In mysterious forests

                                 Past truths - become poisonous









23/09/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Iversen  Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Very nice. Ha et fredelig år.
Andresen Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 6:48 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 5:08 PM
Ooh...love the end! Blessings, sweet poet!
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:43 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 9:07 AM
This is a FAV for me!
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:43 AM
- Caren, many thanks for your visit, the fave and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 3:59 PM
They do look like little houses for fairies but red spells danger. Beautifully penned poem sweet anne-lise:-) Hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 2:49 AM
- Many thanks Jan, for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:42 PM
Sunshine Smile, again a breathtaking pic, absolutely beutiful and the words you chose to describe these mushrooms 'small cabins where fairies live' is so whimsical, but sometimes such beauty comes at a cost! Wonderful poem - best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:04 PM
- They are "fairy" beautiful to look at, my friend ... just watch ... don't eat :) - (not a contest poem :) - Thank you very much for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:56 AM
A vey nice poem and image Panagiota
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:01 PM
- Panagiota, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 6:34 AM
Pithy short poem! I am a lover of herbs. How to save and use them, both are highly important. Best wishes dear lovely Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:00 PM
- Yes, it's important to know Abdullah - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 7:56 PM
I enjoyed this and wish you all the best there is. God bless you, my friend
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:50 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 6:09 PM
i love the poem and the picture of those cool-looking mushrooms, too, anne-lise...
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:50 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Loved this my friend. What may seem fun and inviting may also be deadly at times.
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:32 PM
- Absolutely ... we must always be careful and watchful :) - Thank you very much for your comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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