Am I saying it right

Your Sorrow is a story That follows a hidden path Mountains of accomplishments But stuck living in the past Her voice of silence says more Then the words made from sound Like lightning that hits a tree It's the thunder that shakes the ground Eyes that hold the secrets And a soul held back by chains Love is the key But the mind plays a dangerous game Yes your path is hidden Your sorrow may lead the way Your future is uncertain Just smile, it'll be ok Your eyes do tell the story A universe rolled up in gems Heartache in every corner True beauty stuck within I know your voice is silent I feel your quivering pain I wish I could take it from you So you knew what you had to gain A love you've never seen Emotions locked away A life you thought not possible With an ending much the same Love is the key The heart can be the lense The mind will always be the perception But it doesn't have to win. R.K.H