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Am I Legal

Am I legal? The law announced yesterday, That being me is illegal. For every passing day, The malady becomes more lethal. I didn’t want this, If I got to pick, I try every remedy, every trick, But each coming morning I am more virulent, more sick. They call me an atheist, An abomination to any deity. But I believe in god, The immortal, the almighty. But I am yet to find a religion in this world, that accepts my being. That gives me love, for which I’ve been praying. I have concealed myself so long, I could use some fraying. And for the lack of courage or shame, I choose to remain censored. Till someone could comprehend, Am I legal?; a question unanswered.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/7/2024 9:57:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2016 10:43:00 PM

ame, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 11:12:00 AM

:) skat

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 3:27:00 PM

AME, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Kenisha Shines

Date: 7/22/2015 10:01:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup.good wrote.have a great day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/18/2015 5:51:00 AM

- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Ame :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:24:00 PM

Ame, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ame Val
Date: 7/16/2015 5:59:00 AM

Ty soo much!!!

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 9:07:00 PM

Hi Amy, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ame Val
Date: 7/16/2015 6:02:00 AM

ty soo much !!! The name I/'ve put is Ame It's actually a kinda anagram for my real name(which Ido not wish to reveal) I'm a 22 yr old guy Ty soo much for the appreciation. look forward for further conversations

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2015 5:22:00 PM

a powerful write on gender - you are who you are and should be accepted as such - stay strong:-) hugs Jan xx

Ame Val
Date: 7/16/2015 6:06:00 AM

Thank you! If only more ppl were like you!! I'm not against homophobes, I think everyone has a right to have opinions and express them. But hating someone for such a frugal thing is so sad! And to top it, THE LAW of any country SHOULD NOT BE BASED ON HATE!!!