Merv Hold Poet Free verse

Am I Dreaming

Beguiled by her delicate beauty
Mesmerized by her charm.
Her soft flowing hair like spun gold,
as she danced in the summer sun,
As graceful as a floating feather.
Brighter than a diamond, the sparkle in her eye, 
her smile set my heart on fire,
Her voice as melodious as a symphony,
She remodeled my style and changed my looks ,
Turned me into something she chose me to be,
And incredibly decided that I suited her perfectly.




Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Contest Name : Pick a Title Contest Vol 35 
Theme : Repristination
March 2023

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I Am Anaya February 21, 2024 at 5:48 PM She is most deserving, Merv. Your poem certainly appealed to me, lucky man! I Am Anaya Merv Hold February 25, 2024 at 3:46 AM Thank you Anaya. That was a long time ago. She is tubbier now and does not float like a feather any more. She still appeals to me. I like that phrase you used "most deserving".

Charity Johnson March 4, 2023 at 4:05 AM Beautiful poem :) Charity Johnson March 12, 2023 at 3:15 AM your welcome :) Merv Hold March 10, 2023 at 11:49 AM Charity, I really appreciate having a lady comment on this poem. It gives me assurance that I wrote it in a way that it appeals to both Ladies and men. Thank you.

Terry Ireland February 26, 2023 at 5:40 PM Good start to Souper life. Carry on mate Merv Hold February 27, 2023 at 5:14 AM This one I wrote a fair while ago. It was actually to get back in her good books when I forgot to pick her up from a function she attended. Wow was she mad. She is no push over, Took a bacon and eggs dinner (thats about all I can cook) and several cups of tea and bickies over the next few days to be completely forgiven.

Edward Ibeh February 26, 2023 at 5:05 PM Wonderful poem, Merv:-) I enjoyed reading it. Welcome to Poetrysoup, my friend. Merv Hold February 27, 2023 at 4:35 AM Edward, pleasures all mine. Thank you for your kind words. As you probably guessed its about my wife. She's a peach, and puts up with me, she is the lady I met when my luck was heading fair and someone upstairs decided we should be a pair.