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Always You From the day that I was born to when I was just a tot. I don't recall too much at all of all the things I got. I could not know how I would grow or see things I'd go through. But looking back behind me now there was always you. From rides in back of pick up trucks to picnics at the park. You chased away the monsters in my room when it got dark. There were bruises, cuts and scrapes and teardrops I would cry. Times you smiled at me and promised I won't die. Skipping school and being cool my ignorance abounded. Always back and right on track when you said I was grounded. Times I could not understand some things you used to do. But looking back behind me now there was always you. There were fathers down the block who played catch in the yard. We did too a time or two but you always worked so hard. Still today I sometimes think and start to wonder why. How come back then the way it was I never saw you cry. Then came the days we're friends again and I began to see. That every thing you ever did you always did for me. Finally I found my way and I gained understanding. Of the time called yesterday when life was so demanding. I wish with all that I hold dear oh how I hope and pray. That you can feel the love I send to you this Fathers Day. I am who I am today after all that we've been through. Because you always loved me, and there was always you. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 6/7/2015 9:05:00 AM
You are so lucky to have a father likw that,and what a beautiful dedication this is. Wonderful !
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 10:12:00 AM
It's not my intention to mislead. I grew up without a father :) But there were still men in my life to admire. Thank you though and God bless!!
Date: 6/7/2015 8:37:00 AM
Beautifully penned Edwin made me feel quite emotional reading this - it is not until we are older do we truly appreciate everything our parents did and the sacrifices our parents made for us:-) Good luck with your stall today - so wonderful to see you flying high and spreading your creative wings - enjoy - you will be a enormous success:-) Hugs Jan x
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 10:32:00 AM
:-) am so so so pleased to see you flourishing Edwin your self confidence must be sky high:-) hugs JAN X
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Jan!!! I will send you pics!!!
Date: 6/7/2015 8:25:00 AM
well said
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Judy!! love the pic that shows me your smile! It's nice to SEE you! :)
Date: 6/7/2015 8:13:00 AM
Well penned my friend...sometimes kids don't see the sacrifices made until they are grown....good luck in your endeavors....Tim
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Tim! I could not agree more! God bless and good luck to you as well! Ed
Date: 6/7/2015 7:30:00 AM
Powerful subject and powerful poem. Loved this, Ed. Their constant presence in our growing years, much like that of our mothers, play a vital role in how our principles, perceptions, and convictions about taking responsibility seriously is formed as well as our view about our spiritual Father. Hope you're keeping well. Kim :-)
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 7:42:00 AM
I am doing good. Today I am setting up an area in a local crafts/ consignment shop to sell my printed and signed poetry as well as advertise taking personal requests. Once again I am excited and horrified at the same time LOL. WTH ever happened to staying in a comfort zone for awhile LOL. Hugs <3

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