Maryam Jameela Haniff Poet Quatrain

Always Near

Always Near

I'm so confused
you're on my mind
a peaceful moment 
I cannot find.

This you've cast 
upon my heart
has held me tight
it would not part.

I can't stop thinking
I'm so tormented
your charming smile
was so enchanted.

I see you here
I hear you there
I see and hear you
everywhere.

To be with you
is my only wish
and the moment I saw you
I'll forever cherish.

It doesn't matter
wherever you are
from me, I know
you'll never be far.

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Edward Orozco May 8, 2009 at 8:53 AM This is a very lovely piece... =)- jeremiah

Carolyn Devonshire April 3, 2009 at 3:56 PM You capture the essence of true love in this beautiful poem, Maryam. Thank you for sharing it with us.

John Loving Iii April 3, 2009 at 3:40 PM oh how we torture ourselves. jhl

John Rhinem April 1, 2009 at 3:57 AM Smile~"So Very Beautiful Maryam!!!:):)~Oh, how I love to see love such as this~especially for someone whom I truly and sincerely admire~"You!!!":):) And, You wrote it with soo much passion and soul~Smile~I am soo happy for You Maryam!!!:):)~"Perfect Write!!!"~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!!!:):)

Jen H. March 31, 2009 at 6:00 PM Great poem Maryam!! The emotion is clearly brought through. I really like the second to last stanza, I have felt such a feeling before. Amazing job! ~Jen~

Robin L. Gass March 31, 2009 at 3:12 PM This is well written and the emotion is beautifully expressed! The last last vese is endearing. Excelent wor, Maryam! Love Robin