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Always Near

Always Near I'm so confused you're on my mind a peaceful moment I cannot find. This you've cast upon my heart has held me tight it would not part. I can't stop thinking I'm so tormented your charming smile was so enchanted. I see you here I hear you there I see and hear you everywhere. To be with you is my only wish and the moment I saw you I'll forever cherish. It doesn't matter wherever you are from me, I know you'll never be far.

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Edward Orozco

Date: 5/8/2009 8:53:00 AM

This is a very lovely piece... =)- jeremiah

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2009 3:56:00 PM

You capture the essence of true love in this beautiful poem, Maryam. Thank you for sharing it with us.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/3/2009 3:40:00 PM

oh how we torture ourselves. jhl

John Rhinem

Date: 4/1/2009 3:57:00 AM

Smile~"So Very Beautiful Maryam!!!:):)~Oh, how I love to see love such as this~especially for someone whom I truly and sincerely admire~"You!!!":):) And, You wrote it with soo much passion and soul~Smile~I am soo happy for You Maryam!!!:):)~"Perfect Write!!!"~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!!!:):)

Jen H.

Date: 3/31/2009 6:00:00 PM

Great poem Maryam!! The emotion is clearly brought through. I really like the second to last stanza, I have felt such a feeling before. Amazing job! ~Jen~

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/31/2009 3:12:00 PM

This is well written and the emotion is beautifully expressed! The last last vese is endearing. Excelent wor, Maryam! Love Robin