Jan Allison Poet Couplet

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Always In My Heart

“i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go “ E. E. CUMMINGS




My desktop photo is from when got your degree,
proud mother with son, we both look very happy.
oh precious son, although we are now far apart,
no matter the distance, you’re always in my heart.

The time arrived for you to spread your wings
to make your own life choices, with our blessings.
Perhaps in the future you’ll return to our tiny Isle,
but you’re very ambitious, and do things with style.

Never a day goes by when I don’t think of you.
from the messages you send, you think of me too.
We share a special bond of mother and son.
your heart and my heart they beat just as one

Writing Challenge, November - Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart Wiishkobi Ode

11/11/19

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Sam Kauffman November 20, 2019 at 3:59 PM Hi Jan, Congrats! This poem touched me deeply.

Beata Agustin November 19, 2019 at 8:14 AM Wow! Congrats!! God bless you!!!

John Gondolf November 19, 2019 at 7:03 AM Congrats on your well deserved win, Jan, this is so beautiful and sweet. Hugs, John

Na Na November 19, 2019 at 1:40 AM Cograts Jan. well deserved

Brenda Chiri November 18, 2019 at 9:11 PM Congratulations Jan!;)

Heidi Sands November 18, 2019 at 7:00 PM Congratulations for your special win Jan :)

Constance La France November 18, 2019 at 4:11 PM Jan, congratulations on your top win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned and emotional poem, the love drips from each word, the picture and quote above is lovely too !

Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2019 at 1:48 PM - Congratulations on first place in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 18, 2019 at 1:04 PM Congratulations, Jan, on your 1st place win! Our children or our world a tendril of love from our hearts. Hugs Eve

D.W. Rodgers November 18, 2019 at 11:46 AM Elegant as always, Congrats on your win

Robert Lindley November 16, 2019 at 4:35 PM This my friend is so beautifully, sincerely and truly wrought. I perfect example of a mother's love and her poetic verse that illustrates that God given blessing, reward and dedication!! A fav and a very inspiring gem too!

Cecilia Macfarlane November 15, 2019 at 11:18 AM You describe the bond of mother and child perfectly. Lovely Jan. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2019 at 7:20 AM - The greatest love on earth, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Na Na November 11, 2019 at 5:13 PM Well done Jan. All bonds are worth noting. A mother and sons bond last a lifetime. Security and confidence started with you and they both were instilled in your son, he will have those qualities for the rest of his life. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest. Jan Allison November 12, 2019 at 5:21 AM Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan x

Ilene Bauer November 11, 2019 at 5:07 PM very touching and beautifully written, jan! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison November 12, 2019 at 5:22 AM Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Ts Poetry November 11, 2019 at 3:40 PM It's hard Jan when they spread their wings and soar but you can be proud of his accomplishments Jan Allison November 12, 2019 at 5:22 AM Thanks TS I know how proud you are of your children and their achievements:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit November 11, 2019 at 3:34 PM This poem is so special, Jan..the ending line spells the essence of bond between mother and son. Jan Allison November 12, 2019 at 5:24 AM As a mother and son our bond is so precious and I guess its different from that a father shares with a son:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta November 11, 2019 at 3:24 PM Well said! You son never need doubt your love! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison November 12, 2019 at 5:23 AM I tell him every time we message how much I love him:-) hugs Jan xx