Always and Until

They lie forming in his freezer,
stashed away and in repose,
they always see the daylight,
like an arbiter who knows

his preference for Ripple rocks,
the liquor's almost gone,
alcohol's his habit
and he always drinks alone.

Spending all his welfare dough
on substitutes for nourishment,
the cheapest brands, with shaking hands,
he squanders his entitlement.

Simple, yet so complicated,
pain and sorrow flow as fast
as liquid off a penguin's back,
until the die be cast.

Funny how some frozen water
helps the medicine go down,
his addiction, takes the lonesome
out of longing as he drowns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wesley Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:48 PM
The Dance ison the first page about 2/3 down.
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June 11, 2012 at 2:37 PM
A plus is we won't have to announce every contact!:)
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June 11, 2012 at 2:36 PM
We might have longer conversations about things; basically I would love to delve into your formula for writing and what inspires you - things like that and perhaps because of space e mail might be more convenient so mine is [email protected]. Is it ok?
Wesley Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:32 PM
I guess no one will find my announcement here so I announce there is mail 4u. I also want you to look up "The Dance" It starts with "The man in Berlin loves to dance". It is the wierdest one I wrote and I think you might like it. Do you have some faves of yours? I like them all but wonder which you think are some of your best.
Wesley Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 7:27 PM
The loneliness of addiction is so well portrayed here; the last two lines give an amazing description of how it must feel to be a habitual drinker. This really hits home!
Richards Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Sad, but an honest portrayal....funny how some frozen water will do that....such detail in the everyday moments...so well put to pen!
Gorelick Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 11:35 PM
The last lines are just terrific. Great job. BG
Ryusaka Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 9:37 PM
"his addiction, takes the lonesome out of longing as he drowns." Just... amazing Keith. I love that line. Luv ya! Mick =]
Goff Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 7:39 PM
Keith, a subject close to my heart, well penned, my friend, jim
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