Alway's a Line

at Heaven's gate
and there's a long line
how did I score so low?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Spagnola Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Thanks for introducing me to a new form with a real and clever write :), jill
Heemstra Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Thank you Jill! Your welcome I got hooked on it pretty quick just like haiku. I love writing short pieces.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:18 PM
You are such an excellent Quentionku writer! I enjoyed this very clever piece and and must try it myself sometime! Excellent piece and a 7! Pandita
Heemstra Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Thank you Pandita, I've been hooked on Haikus since 1999. About a year ago I was introduced to Questionku on this site I enjoy writing them both.
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