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Alway's a Line

at Heaven's gate and there's a long line how did I score so low?

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Jill Spagnola

Date: 7/26/2015 5:31:00 PM

Thanks for introducing me to a new form with a real and clever write :), jill

Robert Heemstra
Date: 7/26/2015 7:00:00 PM

Thank you Jill! Your welcome I got hooked on it pretty quick just like haiku. I love writing short pieces.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/26/2015 5:18:00 PM

You are such an excellent Quentionku writer! I enjoyed this very clever piece and and must try it myself sometime! Excellent piece and a 7! Pandita

Robert Heemstra
Date: 7/26/2015 7:06:00 PM

Thank you Pandita, I've been hooked on Haikus since 1999. About a year ago I was introduced to Questionku on this site I enjoy writing them both.