Alto

how does one feel another's
wrath on an internet connection
across a vast blue sea?

how does one feel another's
unfettered valued friendship
over frequencies blind yet free?

how does healing anyone's
heart start to stop the flow
after having felt a defining blow?

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/21/2023 7:16:00 PM

A long distance friendship -I've built some good friendships across the seas here on PS..It's a beautiful feeling,knowing there are good friends somewhere out there.

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/22/2023 11:45:00 AM

I/N friends can be fiend, foe, or favorites. Choose discerningly, Friend. :o]]

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/5/2023 6:24:00 AM

Great one, Arlo. Both good and evil can happen here. Must like life. Your last three lines are superb. You will have to find your own answers. Just because you are honest, do not assume others are. Being yourself, as I have been draws knives. Also friends, That is called LIFE. We are ntot holy gods here. We are human beings. I wish you love. Pretense is more possible on the internet Pangie was

Arlo Parker
Date: 5/5/2023 9:22:00 AM

Yes indeed, Pangie, heartbreaks come from friends, too. Probably best to maintain a very cordial but not intimate relationship here on Soup. Heart safety first. ~;o)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/4/2023 7:38:00 PM

A connection between time and space can happen in an instant. Always be true to who you are and honest with those around you. When a true friendship is made, based on these factors, it's wonderful indeed. :) Brandy

Arlo Parker
Date: 5/4/2023 8:56:00 PM

Unbreakable and uncompromised. Friends make living a joy. Glad to see you, Amiga ~;o)

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/3/2023 9:26:00 AM

It can also bring a closer nit family. The tides which ebbed, now freely to more friendly and welcoming shores— let us celebrate together on the warm sands of friendship—I Am Anaya I like how you weave the internet with the sea!

Arlo Parker
Date: 5/3/2023 4:20:00 PM

No blocks, just good will towards all our PS friends whoever they are or want to be. ~;o)