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It’s always the same.  
The darkness. 
 
I don’t care what you think or what you say. 
It has sound and it has color.  It has life.  It has energy.   
There is no black void in the darkness.  There is no quiet in the darkness.  

That’s a lie. 
I know because I’ve been there, I still end up there.
Night or day, awake or asleep. 
I’ve traveled every avenue of this rank and rancid place.  
I’ve been to this violent place.

It’s like an animal ripping and scratching and tearing at me from the inside-out. 
And it does.  It claws and rips and shreds and devours.  
Every single time.  
See, it has color.  It definitely has sound.
Horrifying, terrifying, pleading sounds. 

It screams at me and then echoes back from every crevice.  
It has no escape or hiding place.  
It always finds me.  
It always consumes me and leaves me so tired that I can barely breathe.  
I don’t even try to move.  I can’t.  

I have no life left in me, no fight left in me.  
No hope left inside me.  
See, it has its own energy.  It's own life.

It’s always the same.  
The darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/6/2009 12:10:00 PM
Im, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:02:00 PM
Amazing poem. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 9/26/2009 9:55:00 AM
I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:12:00 PM
Im, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2009 6:48:00 AM
Very thought evoking. I believe there are many kinds of darkness. Good and bad. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:53:00 PM
Im, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Im>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week LM. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 7:00:00 PM
Sad but captivating poetry. I like it. -ED-
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:04:00 PM
Such a sad view. In life there is always hope. Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having you poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/22/2009 7:59:00 AM
We all have experienced the darkness, some more than others. An excellent and sad write, many can understand and relate to. Wishing you lighter and brighter days. Love, Shar
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