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It’s always the same.  
The darkness. 
 
I don’t care what you think or what you say. 
It has sound and it has color.  It has life.  It has energy.   
There is no black void in the darkness.  There is no quiet in the darkness.  

That’s a lie. 
I know because I’ve been there, I still end up there.
Night or day, awake or asleep. 
I’ve traveled every avenue of this rank and rancid place.  
I’ve been to this violent place.

It’s like an animal ripping and scratching and tearing at me from the inside-out. 
And it does.  It claws and rips and shreds and devours.  
Every single time.  
See, it has color.  It definitely has sound.
Horrifying, terrifying, pleading sounds. 

It screams at me and then echoes back from every crevice.  
It has no escape or hiding place.  
It always finds me.  
It always consumes me and leaves me so tired that I can barely breathe.  
I don’t even try to move.  I can’t.  

I have no life left in me, no fight left in me.  
No hope left inside me.  
See, it has its own energy.  It's own life.

It’s always the same.  
The darkness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Im, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
Sheart Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 1:02 PM
Amazing poem. Love Light Truth Patty
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September 26, 2009 at 9:55 AM
I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Im, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 6:48 AM
Very thought evoking. I believe there are many kinds of darkness. Good and bad. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
Moreno Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:53 PM
Im, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
Fraser Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Im>>James
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week LM. Love, Carol
Coet Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 7:00 PM
Sad but captivating poetry. I like it. -ED-
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September 20, 2009 at 5:04 PM
Such a sad view. In life there is always hope. Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having you poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 7:59 AM
We all have experienced the darkness, some more than others. An excellent and sad write, many can understand and relate to. Wishing you lighter and brighter days. Love, Shar
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