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~ Sitting beneath an autumn moon watching shadows dancing amidst pine needles swaying as rhythmic motions of light entrance Harmonic whispers of nightfall desires come as music to my mind, lyrics afloat on rhyming breezes in the key of unquestioned love I take pen in hand as a starlit melody traces over my thoughts, like a fallen leaf meandering slowly to the ground Though try as I might on this enchanted evening where my every dream comes true… I cannot write this song For it has already been written, perfect words in eternal ink of the deepest devotion on my heart…by you ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/12/2019 3:58:00 AM
I found myself returned to one of my struggles..... The word “love”.... a word which falls so short in our attempt to cover such a broad spectrum of emotion. Your words flowed lightly enough upon the page it allowed me to take my own journey while in contemplation of the scene you painted. Nice color. Darrell
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Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 7:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Darrell, I am glad you liked this. I know what you mean, expressing love and making it feel real is difficult. I think I do better with broken heart poetry, that I can feel. :)
Date: 11/11/2019 12:32:00 AM
Love this but especially that last stanza...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2019 8:14:00 AM
Happy you liked this one my friend. I appreciate you.
Date: 11/6/2019 6:36:00 PM
Sigh... this is such a stunning poem my friend... the images, the language, just so delicate, like love...that ending just makes this poem a perfect masterpiece.... i love this amazing write.... wow, Goodnight Chris! hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 7:13:00 AM
Thank you my friend for all of the kindness you show me. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one and grateful for the kind words you have written here.
Date: 11/6/2019 5:25:00 PM
This is a perfect poem. I love harmonic whispers of nightfall desires and as starlit melody traces. So well written and a FAV Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. I am happy you liked this.

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