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August- 31- 2025

Alpha Lines Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

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Alpha Lines- Our Love

Leave me never or passively quit, 
Love is a wave running through our core.
I know, I am full only when you are near.
When you stray far from me, I feel so sore.

All brilliant colours do eventually fade
But your shine stays eternally as of moon in my sky.
My heart goes wild with a love so mad 
Come down, don’t stay like a star up so high.

In jubilation, keep love munificently nest
If you allow, I will set up all that suits your whim,
And wrap you in love’s shawl, cozy and warm.
In the lake of joy, like a pair of swans, we shall swim. 

Balmy care descends eternally flowing
My love for you is deep, a love you will feel.
My body, mind and soul- I shall give them all.
Also, my warm presence that can calm and heal.
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September 17, 2025 at 1:27 AM
Many congratulations!!
May Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 3:40 PM
Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely penned
Mcconnell Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 2:06 PM
Nice pen Valsa, with good rhyme and flow too. Trust all is well with you, blessings,Gordon
Greenhough Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 7:00 PM
Each poem is clever and each one is beautiful.
Narain Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:06 PM
Excellent bpoem. You deserve all the awards for the best poem.
Williams Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 6:49 AM
Dear Valsa, your Alpha Lines flow like a love song wrapped in moonlight — tender, radiant, and brimming with devotion. A joy to read, good luck in the contest...Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 12:11 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Alpha Lines- Our Love" write. "Good Luck"  Have a fun day writing away..........
DiMino Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Beautiful! Love is the balm and cure for all -- even if terminal, to go with love is to enter with joy. In my mind, anyway. Great read to start the day. Have a blessed Sunday, Valsa.
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