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Alpaca

Oh my Alpaca Has purple spots You can see them when he trots I'll take his wool to make a sweater Then we'll both have purple spots

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Chandru Ganesh S

Date: 3/26/2009 3:31:00 AM

Tough theme.. nicely told

Denis Joe

Date: 3/26/2009 3:11:00 AM

I always find poems for children really difficult. some say that you have to think like a child, I don't agree. I think that the writer has to be open-minded enough to view a world they may well have left behind a long time ago. The writer should ask themselves 'Is this what I would have appreciated as a child?' For me the answer to this poem is a resounding 'Yes!' Short and beautifully inventive, but also skillfully crafted.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/25/2009 8:30:00 AM

So we are animal lovers, great, and welcome to the soup. Love

Donald Cauthon

Date: 3/24/2009 10:23:00 PM

well we'll have no trouble spoting ya. Kinda cute