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Alpaca

Oh my Alpaca
Has purple spots
You can see them when he trots
I'll take his wool to make a sweater
Then we'll both have purple spots

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/26/2009 3:31:00 AM
Tough theme.. nicely told
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Date: 3/26/2009 3:11:00 AM
I always find poems for children really difficult. some say that you have to think like a child, I don't agree. I think that the writer has to be open-minded enough to view a world they may well have left behind a long time ago. The writer should ask themselves 'Is this what I would have appreciated as a child?' For me the answer to this poem is a resounding 'Yes!' Short and beautifully inventive, but also skillfully crafted.
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:30:00 AM
So we are animal lovers, great, and welcome to the soup. Love
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Date: 3/24/2009 10:23:00 PM
well we'll have no trouble spoting ya. Kinda cute
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