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This or That Vol.33 poetry contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh May 2025 "Along with the thunder" my phrase choice given by Mr.Ibeh

Along with the Thunder



There is not always rain Along with the thunder There is not always bite Along with the bark There is not always oxygen When we go under Not always a devil Along with the dark But we can always count on, Along with the sorrow, Laughter and joy joining this life We can always count on, Along with the blood shed, Somewhere, a sharp wicked knife We can always count on These weapons of warfare Harmless until held in our hands We can always count on Having our fair share The wicked intent of mortal man There will be a rainbow Along with the thunder Along with the lightning The still waters of night There will be such beauty After all blows asunder Along with the blindness A great, glorious sight
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Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Crystol, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem. I love the format and the flow as well.
Woods Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:27 AM
Thank you so much Edward! I enjoyed writing this and I'm proud of the results. See you next time! Xo
Godwin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 12:37 PM
Wowzer, wowzer, poetic-talent-powered, dazzling-delivered write that sizzles and grants my poetry love prime fizzles. Good luck in the contest, this is special. Love this ... CayCay
Woods Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 5:56 AM
You have made me smile with your kind words, tysm!! I'm honored to have someone of your talent enjoy my writing! Xo -Crystol Woods
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 11:33 PM
you speak of thunder yet there is much gentle charm within your lines, crys...love the paradoxical element here!
Woods Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 10:09 AM
I love to read your interpretations, you have great insight! Ty for telling me what you think! Xo
Scott Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 7:29 PM
I have to say, I appreciate the poignancy of this poem, Crystol, for the times in which we live. There is a cautious optimism, laced with warning and wisdom. You have balanced well using opposition in tandem with connection. I like it; clever and thought inducing (fav). Blessings, S:) x
Woods Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 10:08 AM
That's wonderful feedback Sam,I appreciate it so much! Ty for the fav! That's rare indeed for me... I'll treasure this. Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 11:56 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Woods Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Thanks Paula dear! You always put a smile on my face! Xoxo
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