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"Along with the thunder there's gotta be a little rain sometime." - quote by the author with apologies to Lynn Anderson's Lyrics for the song "Rose Garden".
“It’s not about waiting for the storm to pass, It’s about learning to dance in the rain.” - Vivian Greene - often attributed
“When the thunder roars it breaks the silence, so the heavens can weep, and we may drink and dream again.” - Traditional Japanese proverb + Henry David Thoreau, journal, 1841

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With limp thunder came silent still-born rain. Sky broke, clouds chose to play apart today, as the gray clad stand-ins in blue duffel coats, and snow white hoods slunk away, to fade away, like peals of bells fade when echoes fail to surface on soft absorbent compliant surfaces. Black clouds like the thunder missed the role-call. Remained waiting in the bleachers for someone to applaud, to gee-up the thunder with claps, to raise a curtain call. To giddy-up, giddy-up the mighty steed Thunder, to do its clippety-clop, clippety-clop thing. to do its rumble, rattle and roll, with steely shod and shiny hooves on cobble stones. Sometimes my dear steed Thunder, led along on its reins and bridle, enters the storm unmounted, hushed to neigh forlorn, in gray clouds, in sky-blue skies.

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Date: 6/2/2025 8:27:00 AM
John, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully composed piece. I enjoyed it
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Date: 6/2/2025 9:55:00 AM
Yeah thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes

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