Along the Stream

whither
O willow,
weeping so free-
shading the stream unto
the sea;
hither
O willow,
whisper to me-
the comings and goings
you sea.

Brian Strand June 1 stream contest
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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Brian. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:47 AM
powerhouse, brian...my sweeetest congrats! :) hugggs
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on this big win in the contest of constance, Brian
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Congrats Brian on your win in the contest of Constance..
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:38 PM
congratulations on your placement in my contest ~
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:08 PM
so lyrical, brian.. big cheers on your win.:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Congrats Brian on your HM in Constance's contest with this beautiful write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Rhinem Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Smile ~ Brain Strand ~ My Man ~ Now There's An Old Familier Face In The Crowd ~ How Lovely ~ Nice Poe ~ With A Sweeet Flow ~ Love, John!:) ~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:07 AM
oh so excellent these words Brian.. good luck in the contest luv.. such a lilting read..luv..
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