Along the Red

Orange plateaus standing  by
dusty red wind twist so high
white clouds sail a pinkish sky….
Red River runs dry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 11:09 AM
a very vivid haiku, Robb :) enjoyed the image you paint here-- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 11:26 PM
ooh la la, this is striking. Could be an Okie from the STokie. a high rate for this one!
Roberts Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 8:10 AM
lovely
Pettit Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 8:00 AM
A good dodoitsu to describe scenery somewhere out west.
B Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 7:44 AM
Oh, I really like this!! Nice!
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