Along the Cottage Kitchen Garden Wall

The heavy odor of lavender polish softly opened the door
Peeling paint  family holiday  house timber-slated chairs
Orange-flower water the  tick-tock of the grandfather clock
Pruning orange fruit  trees  which  grew behind the house
Sunlight streaming into the room through sloping window
onto  a table, box of cigarettes a  carved  pipe and a photo. 
Hanging from the mirror by  two ribbons,  a little plush hat.
Sweet  air scented  with potting earth  and  horse manure
A valley  tumbled into a blue-green canopy of forest gums
Humming sofly  under her breath  they  threaded their way
Glittering  eyes  rain dripping  eyelashes  corkscrew  curls
Living in a woodland forest cottage like country princesses
White painted railings polished wooden floors glass inset
Orchards laden with blossoms, tea on the valley verandah
White chocolate eclairs rosehip  apple and Lady Grey teas
Vegetable garden ,lavender ,daisies , foxgloves and roses.
Thicket of hazel,holly and brambles coated the under slope
Antique French doors large wooden shutters,blue tint spiral
An  orchard   that  glows red  in  the sunset  from  the studio
Glimpse of  fine  white teeth, challenging smile  fan aflutter 
Enchanted room night of candlelight sweetly familiar odors
Catching tadpoles +  baby frogs in the lilly and crocus pond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 3/17/2011 4:09:00 PM
This is lovely, Mariana. Beautiful description of this family cottage, grips one with warm and tingling nostagia. I'm feeling sorry for myself for not having read this before. I can smell the lavender and other welcoming smells. So happy I came across this write...thank you for sharing!! Mikki
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