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Along Came a Flood

12/2/22. Sponsored by Edward Ibeh Along came a flood Along came a flood Rushing in my head What will today bring? What will be said? Will today be a sad and dull day? Or will sunshine brighten the way? Who knows what will happen Nobody knows for sure What will the future bring? My head will roar. Let's hope for good times, Happiness and delight, Let us hope that the future is bright!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2022 12:38:00 PM

I love this positive poem that bubbles with delight!!! one of yours I had not read yet!

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/18/2022 6:13:00 AM

Hi, thank you for your comments. Glad you liked the poem.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/28/2022 8:22:00 AM

A creative write. Days filled with sunshine/smiles are the best kind. Today, be blessed with sunshine/smiles...........

Donna Fullerton

Date: 4/4/2022 8:00:00 AM

Hi Jeanette, I am new here as well. I like your poem. I have a busy brain and get the rushings as well, though not as much as in the past. I see that you have let's/let us twice. Maybe say hoping for a future that is bright. ? and/or with happiness and delight. All the best for a great week. You can look at my poems and see if you have any comments. They'd be appreciated. Donna Fullerton