Donna Jones Poet Free verse

Alone-Reverse

She was left alone
After the accident
In the darkness

And strangers cried..
Their secrets were whispered
As she listened
Through hollow walls

The memories came crashing
And invading her dreams
Haunting all tomorrows

Forever..



Reverse Poem Contest 8-12-2013

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Bl Devnath August 31, 2013 at 10:50 AM Totally Reverse poem excellently penned.Congrats on your win. Loved always,my friend, bl

Nette Onclaud August 29, 2013 at 11:37 PM thumbs up on your shining win, donns.. congrats, way to go!..:) huggs

Tim Ryerson August 29, 2013 at 5:23 PM Oh my Donna...I think I remember you telling me about this...If I had to pick a fav verse, I guess it would be the second...Do you have any idea how much you have grown as a poet since I first started reading your stuff? Mercy me... Donna Jones August 29, 2013 at 9:49 PM Means a lot Tim..thanks....

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2013 at 11:10 AM Congrats on your great win..One of the better ones..Sara Donna Jones August 29, 2013 at 9:50 PM So sweet Sara...and thanks for the mail:-)

Poet Destroyer A August 28, 2013 at 9:16 AM Donna, a very nice win.. congratulations... Linda Donna Jones August 29, 2013 at 9:51 PM Thank you Linda....

Richard Lamoureux August 28, 2013 at 7:29 AM This one is so sad but so perfectly expressed. Reading it backwards was even more impactful. Congratulations.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper August 27, 2013 at 8:35 PM Very good, both ways -I like this one very much...I'm adding this to my favorite poem list for sure !!!SNOITALUTARGNOC annoD no ruoy niw LOL!!! MC Donna Jones August 29, 2013 at 6:49 PM UoY knahT.......:-) very kind.....

Danesh Morgan August 27, 2013 at 6:24 PM Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Joseph May August 27, 2013 at 4:11 PM congrats on a fine win Donna

Carrie Richards August 27, 2013 at 3:44 PM Congratulations, Donna ! This one hurts to read it, whether it's up or down, the emotion is the same!

Mustapha Mohammed August 19, 2013 at 6:33 AM This was very impressive Donne.Hugs for this.

Eileen Manassian August 17, 2013 at 12:24 PM THIS IS AWESOME MD!!!! LOVE IT! You will FLY in the contest! XOXOXOXOXOXO

Carrie Richards August 16, 2013 at 1:14 PM Either way........this works beautifully!! Good luck in the contest, Donna....this has a haunting quality !

Poet Destroyer A August 16, 2013 at 9:50 AM I like it Donna, i still don't get the contest... good luck in the contest...Linda

April Gabriella August 15, 2013 at 2:29 PM Wonderful! And even more so in reverse. Excellent work!

The Situation August 15, 2013 at 12:34 AM Just as good in reverse.

Debbie Guzzi August 14, 2013 at 3:00 PM Really cool the way you did this, I don't know if I can get my brain to? LOL Thank you for stopping by and reading my verse. Light & Love

Robert Johnson August 14, 2013 at 11:26 AM Shadows cast a haunting picture that secretly surmise. That when the moment has it's way. They suddenly demise. Peace. :)

Joseph May August 14, 2013 at 7:01 AM nicely penned Donna...best wishes

Noel Villarosa August 13, 2013 at 11:21 PM Donna, you did well on this contest. Either way you still made it clear. Appreciate the time in reading my poem. (^_^) Noel.

Sukmawati Komala August 13, 2013 at 10:23 PM GO Win and congratulation for the contest sweet deary Donna...a very nice write :) <3 thank you for every visit <3 Sk

Delysia Hendricks August 13, 2013 at 7:23 PM A good read either way, Donna. I know you will do well in the contest. Good luck, my friend. Licia :-)

Cecilia Macfarlane August 13, 2013 at 4:27 PM Excellent write that reads well both ways...best of luck in the contest.Hugs

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2013 at 3:09 PM donna, don't worry. you did it right. When I first read his contest, I thought he meant us to write it WORD for WORD reversed. I did not realize he meant only to reverse the lines. It should not be so difficult in that case and I ought to try it!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2013 at 10:21 AM - You always impresses me,Donna ... this is awesome! - Good luck in the contest! - All the best to you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Donna Jones August 13, 2013 at 11:10 AM My, very nice compliment....thank you very much....

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