Alone With Me

Hi Besma, every now and then we are beset with thoughts vagrant and scenes upsetting which disturb our quietude. At times we long for a kind of serene silence. Though man is a social being and is gregarious, he/she seeks solitude to commune with the internal spirit, to delve deep into the core of his/her mind, forgetting the corporeal existence and extract gold from tons of black ore. Loneliness is despicable, but solitude is blissful . A great poem Besma

How deep are the feelings expressed in this poem of yours, Dear Poet! "Be alone/only with me" - delving deep inside our heart, perhaps we find ourselves!

What a beautiful way to express these lovely thoughts of yours, Besma! To be alone, but certainly far from being lonesome. Probably those are your most productive moments, when distractions are kept at bay. ~ Warm regards and blessings, my friend. // paul

"Thoughts creeping that usual hustle that disturbing bustle..." your emotions remind me of mustangs galloping hard and far across barren mesa with a violent sky behind them, running with strength and grace to beat the storm. There exists an odd rustle in reclusion, it's the clawing and scraping made by the heart to express itself vibrantly. You make self love intense Poetess...Justin

My dearest Besma, I am, as always and with deep appreciation, drawn into the deep feelings of the introspective well of your creative spirit, your loving heart and your all-embracing soul. My being relates to the intrinsic longing you express and my emotions respond to your beautiful artistry revealing your need for escape and disconnect from the disturbing bustle for a space of personal peace, peace of mind. How do we harmonize that which is within and without? So vivid and thought provoking is your wondrous artwork of luscious words, dear soul sister. A profound poem for your ardent reader to ponder over and again. A great masterwork of creative emotional expression and a treasured FAV for me! I love the Rassouli painting too! Warmest wishes, love and hugs, dear poetess.. be safe and healthy always.. ~Susan

To be at peace with the world we need to be at peace with onself.... We need to go deep inside ourselves to find that place...Deep and emotive poetry.... Excellent as always.

You are peace, softness and understanding. The gentle rhyme and reason of moments divine. When all the world is quiet, or when all the world moves at lightening speed. You are the calm through it all. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your heart is golden, my dear sweet friend. Many blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

just very very very beautiful.

Reflections of a mind that yearns for peace and harmony. Great write that evokes human introspection...How can I harmonize a body of no fruit a stem of no roota colour of no hue a mind of no view a silence of no sound a heart of no bound! A deep write, Besma.