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My spirit flew away to far off lands, travelling over hills and vales, o'er seas and deserts dry, until it arrived high on a cold chain of ridges, where soft winds caressed my face, freshness embalmed my inner self. Perhaps that's why I saw her there, alone lying on her back, gazing up at the sky savouring the exquisite joy of silence. For in that treasured tranquillity dreams have room to spiral from the depth of her eidetic memories renewed and revived, never forgotten. Out of that quietude she heard the soft voice of her essence, reflections of her life, the joys of motherhood, the fulfilment of love, the pangs of parting, the pain of illness, the weakness of humanity, the dreams and emotions that ebbed, flowed and ebbed again. I knew she left her home town deserting her desolate living renouncing all the humdrum of city lights. No wonder she flew away seeking refuge on a mountain side, above a cascade of water, lying on the sweet grass that bordered the lonely stream. For here she was at peace. Relief tears trickled down her cheeks: she could never really forget. My spirit felt for her for I could feel that deep inside her was beauty never bound. I knew despite her tears, she was happy there: oh, that she could remain on that pretty mountain nook holding tight to hope: happy amongst the heather near the tumbling brook for ever and evermore.

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Date: 11/21/2021 12:55:00 PM
Very compassionate and descriptive lines you have penned in this passionate one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2021 7:45:00 PM
Oh, I have been travelling along with you over dales and vales, until arrived on a chain of ridges where she is lying by the mountain side, embalmed in Nature's beauty, away from the hustle of life...! Let her seek solace there... I shall not disturb her!..... Lovely penning, dear Victor!
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Date: 11/14/2021 2:25:00 AM
Lovely images close this poem...Delice
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:47:00 PM
Awesome Victor...your beautiful ink just flows creating great imagery and feel, with alliteration too...I loved the second stanza specially...God bless...~ Ani
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Date: 11/8/2021 11:22:00 PM
A wonderful poem with great imagery... Great feeling.
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Date: 11/8/2021 11:02:00 AM
Victor, it's a pleasure to read this enchanting poem, full of peace and reflection. Have a wonderful week, my friend. :)
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Date: 11/8/2021 9:26:00 AM
Oh my Victor. You have touched my heart with this breathtakingly beautiful poem. I am inspired by your enchanting words my friend. I will save this to my Faves! First poem I am reading this morning before I begin my busy day and I thank you. I hope you are well and that you have an enjoyable week. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/8/2021 8:19:00 AM
So romantic and written with great longing, Victor. Your lovely words capture the mood perfectly! Enjoyed! :)
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Date: 11/8/2021 7:38:00 AM
Such a prolific writer! So beautiful, my friend!
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Date: 11/8/2021 7:38:00 AM
Dear Victor, your words like a mirror, reflect images of life, that out of a past of darkness light can be found. Beautiful! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/8/2021 6:07:00 AM
Exquisite images of her your gifted pen paints reflecting on joy, fulfilment, laments of the past --in solitude that speaks eloquently. A model for writing awesome poetry, Victor. A definite FAVE for me.
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Date: 11/8/2021 5:23:00 AM
Happy and yet tearful … conflicting emotions here Victor!
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Date: 11/8/2021 5:01:00 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Victor, Tom
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Date: 11/8/2021 4:47:00 AM
You have painted a serene place where one can embrace peace and love... So beautifully penned...
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Date: 11/8/2021 3:40:00 AM
When we get to that place of peace and paradise, all pain is forgotten replaced by beautiful memories of life and undying love. We become the bloom of God's flower, and we enjoy the hour of eternity as if it were a last cup of water, love you dear man, stay strong, and be brave as the stars of heaven. Lily waits for you, :)
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Date: 11/8/2021 2:44:00 AM
Such beautiful calm images Victor your poetic words took my breath away to that peaceful mountain side ~ thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 11/8/2021 2:38:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Victor, loved it. What a flight she took, peace found on that pretty mountain rook… Belle
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Date: 11/7/2021 11:04:00 PM
Lovely and peaceful images of faraway mountains, great use of words too, Victor:)
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