Alone At Night

I feel unease, when trees creek so
As wind chimes chatter to and fro
From dusk till dawn my nerves do seize 
When trees creek so, I feel unease

Strange things I see, when darkness falls
Soft shadows dancing down the halls
Translucent specters watching me
When darkness falls, strange things I see

At night alone, my thoughts do stray
Splintered memories, barbed and splayed 
So many voices – most my own 
My thoughts do stray, at night alone

The white coats come, when daylight breaks
The blue pill helps reduce the shakes
First eyes are checked, then straps undone
When daylight breaks, the white coats come


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Williams Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:14 AM
David congrats on your win....David
Mohn Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:44 PM
Thanks David
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Wow! This is an awesome write. Glad Andrea liked it as much as I do..congrats. BG
Mohn Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Thanks so much Barbara – just read your Tarantula poem…wonderful!
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:08 AM
I loved the originality of this one!!! Wow, it was a guy in a mental institution. That really clinched it at the end. Had to give this one a second place win. Congrats on a job well done!
Mohn Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Thanks Andrea, I’m truly honored to be placed this high - there are some great poems here
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, david
Mohn Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 2:51 PM
Thanks Dr.Ram :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:44 AM
fantastic imagery,david.. you deserve a top win!.. 'grads on your award!.. huggs
Mohn Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Nette – Yours was hands down the most visually stunning
Kayode Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:09 AM
A great work you did here,congrats David.
Mohn Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 2:52 PM
Thanks so much :)
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