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Alone Again - Naturally

Constant pounding of the Bullmastiff's tail.
I know you are approaching.
You wont speak, I don't expect it. You bring the mail.
The summer's heat is encroaching.

You being here is a comforting thought.
I've been restless waiting for you to appear.
You don't come as often as I feel you ought.
The days are longer now, more to fear.

Oppressive temperatures, I sit near a fan. 
Just hoping someone will come.
Scribing out poems as best I can.
Closing the blind from the blistering sun.

I hear you in the kitchen, perhaps making tea.
The dog nudges my door to let itself in. Sits beside my chair.
You haven’t yet said hello to me.
I know you are bringing food that the dog expects me to share.

You will bring the food in soon and tell the news of the day.
You will feed the dog with scraps and maybe a bone.
Then you will say goodbye and be on your way.
And again my son you will leave the dog and I to be on our own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/22/2023 12:50:00 PM
Dear SV, such a truly touching poem that so effectively draws the reader into the lonely, poor woman’s world. Sadly, this happens so often doesn’t it. Dogs make wonderful, faithful companions but so many, especially the elderly and affirm, miss human contact, conversation, that brightens an otherwise bleak, silent day. You have captured this so endearingly well my talented, poetic friend. Many should read this and then perhaps more time, consideration and an extra smile would be given.
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Date: 11/25/2023 1:33:00 PM
Oh Christina, your beautiful comment went unnoticed to me til just now. What a dear friend you are to be so patient with me. Your words to my poetry are so kind. My soul is gladdened that I can bring a glimmer of enjoyment to you. My appreciation is boundless. Thank you so very much. Wen
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Date: 11/22/2023 12:53:00 PM
So enjoyed reading this poignant, well expressed poem. Hugs and smiles to you xx :):)
Date: 11/19/2023 6:05:00 AM
Nice narrative. And, of course, cool reference to the Song.
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Date: 11/19/2023 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Tom. Seemed an apt title, but she's not quite in as dire straights as the bloke in the song. Cheers SV
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