Alone

Written July 11, 2017 While everyone is drowning in forty ounces of sorrow and success I'd rather be dancing alone with my self fulfilling complex I've read all the articles and heard your pseudoscience concepts Just let me go and watch how fast my beating heart gets When I'm standing alone in fields of dying leaves and lives fulfilled Onto an empty canvas I spill

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/30/2017 9:30:00 PM

Now this is intriguing!!! Those last lines are awesome in particular. I like how you put sorrow and success together. Beautifully written! Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2017 5:14:00 PM

It is so good to see you again and read this poem on your feelings of being alone. I personally LOVE being alone!! Not constantly, but more often than most!