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Long and lonely days lost by hope in quiet song from sounds a silent heart has pawned lay broken neath my endless thoughts of you...

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/1/2017 8:43:00 PM

This poem seems sad to me. It sound like you are missing someone. Have a nice evening my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/1/2017 8:52:00 PM

Thank you for the visit Darlene.

Lynn Marie

Date: 9/21/2017 5:17:00 PM

Oh how sad, achingly so. If it were not for sadness, we would not know the great joy of bliss...sigh:) Beautifully emotive writing Charlie xo

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/22/2017 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Lynn

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/25/2017 2:54:00 AM

Hope is an act of endless thoughts, a tender look will bring it up.

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/25/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thank you for the visit Pashang.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/22/2017 6:28:00 AM

Good Morning or Afternoon Charlie. Hi. My goodness this is beautiful poetry. It is brief yet it speaks volumes and speaks poetic expression. It was a pleasure reading this. Enjoy the day. Well done entirely.

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/25/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Lisa.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2017 4:19:00 PM

Short yet full of feelings, Charlie. I notice that this poem is like a prologue to your next poem. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/6/2017 7:26:00 PM

It is. I noted that on the lyric. Thank you Paul.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2017 8:39:00 PM

I agree with Joseph, great depth and emotion too, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/4/2017 9:56:00 PM

Thank you Andre.

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2017 8:42:00 AM

So much depth in this short verse..Great write Charlie.. A7

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/3/2017 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Joseph...

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2017 4:48:00 PM

very emotional write Charlie I really enjoyed your verse:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/2/2017 7:49:00 PM

Thank you Jan...

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/2/2017 4:36:00 PM

Beautifully done Charlie...I can feel the loneliness in your verse...all the best... ^WW^

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/2/2017 7:49:00 PM

Thank you WW...

Maria Williams

Date: 4/30/2017 4:46:00 AM

Beautifully written Charlie. Very emotional piece. 7+

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/1/2017 12:02:00 AM

Thank you Maria...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/28/2017 5:03:00 PM

Oh so very sad, Charlie, and beautifully written.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 8:31:00 PM

Thank you Agnes...

Lin Lane

Date: 4/28/2017 1:48:00 PM

Such despairing thoughts, Charlie, and yet so eloquently written.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 8:30:00 PM

Thank you Lin...

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/28/2017 12:30:00 PM

I agree, this is sad and yet so well written. It reaches the reader with such fine expression :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Heidi...

Chris Green

Date: 4/28/2017 11:13:00 AM

Such a sad and lonely feeling piece Charlie, but so well written. Short and deep and very emotive. I really liked this my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Chris...