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Alone 

Long and lonely days
     lost by hope in quiet song
     from sounds a silent heart has pawned
     lay broken neath my endless thoughts of you...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017
emotionslost lovemissing youverse

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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/1/2017 8:43:00 PM
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This poem seems sad to me. It sound like you are missing someone. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/1/2017 8:52:00 PM
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Thank you for the visit Darlene.
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Lynn Marie
Date: 9/21/2017 5:17:00 PM
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Oh how sad, achingly so. If it were not for sadness, we would not know the great joy of bliss...sigh:) Beautifully emotive writing Charlie xo
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/22/2017 7:25:00 AM
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Thank you Lynn
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/25/2017 2:54:00 AM
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Hope is an act of endless thoughts, a tender look will bring it up.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/25/2017 11:39:00 AM
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Thank you for the visit Pashang.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/22/2017 6:28:00 AM
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Good Morning or Afternoon Charlie. Hi. My goodness this is beautiful poetry. It is brief yet it speaks volumes and speaks poetic expression. It was a pleasure reading this. Enjoy the day. Well done entirely.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/25/2017 11:39:00 AM
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Thank you Lisa.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2017 4:19:00 PM
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Short yet full of feelings, Charlie. I notice that this poem is like a prologue to your next poem. Regards // paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/6/2017 7:26:00 PM
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It is. I noted that on the lyric. Thank you Paul.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/4/2017 8:39:00 PM
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I agree with Joseph, great depth and emotion too, Charlie!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/4/2017 9:56:00 PM
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Thank you Andre.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/3/2017 8:42:00 AM
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So much depth in this short verse..Great write Charlie.. A7
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/3/2017 9:57:00 AM
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Thank you Joseph...
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2017 4:48:00 PM
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very emotional write Charlie I really enjoyed your verse:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/2/2017 7:49:00 PM
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Thank you Jan...
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Winged Warrior
Date: 5/2/2017 4:36:00 PM
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Beautifully done Charlie...I can feel the loneliness in your verse...all the best... ^WW^
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/2/2017 7:49:00 PM
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Thank you WW...
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Maria Williams
Date: 4/30/2017 4:46:00 AM
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Beautifully written Charlie. Very emotional piece. 7+
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/1/2017 12:02:00 AM
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Thank you Maria...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/28/2017 5:03:00 PM
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Oh so very sad, Charlie, and beautifully written.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 8:31:00 PM
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Thank you Agnes...
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/28/2017 1:48:00 PM
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Such despairing thoughts, Charlie, and yet so eloquently written.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 8:30:00 PM
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Thank you Lin...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/28/2017 12:30:00 PM
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I agree, this is sad and yet so well written. It reaches the reader with such fine expression :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 12:54:00 PM
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Thank you Heidi...
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Chris Green
Date: 4/28/2017 11:13:00 AM
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Such a sad and lonely feeling piece Charlie, but so well written. Short and deep and very emotive. I really liked this my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 12:55:00 PM
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Thank you Chris...
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