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Alone

Long and lonely days
     lost by hope in quiet song
     from sounds a silent heart has pawned
     lay broken neath my endless thoughts of you...

Copyright © Charlie Smith | Year Posted 2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu

October 1, 2017 at 8:43 PM

This poem seems sad to me. It sound like you are missing someone. Have a nice evening my friend.

October 1, 2017 at 8:52 PM

Thank you for the visit Darlene.

September 21, 2017 at 5:17 PM

Oh how sad, achingly so. If it were not for sadness, we would not know the great joy of bliss...sigh:) Beautifully emotive writing Charlie xo

September 22, 2017 at 7:25 AM

Thank you Lynn

May 25, 2017 at 2:54 AM

Hope is an act of endless thoughts, a tender look will bring it up.

May 25, 2017 at 11:39 AM

Thank you for the visit Pashang.

May 22, 2017 at 6:28 AM

Good Morning or Afternoon Charlie. Hi. My goodness this is beautiful poetry. It is brief yet it speaks volumes and speaks poetic expression. It was a pleasure reading this. Enjoy the day. Well done entirely.

May 25, 2017 at 11:39 AM

Thank you Lisa.

May 6, 2017 at 4:19 PM

Short yet full of feelings, Charlie. I notice that this poem is like a prologue to your next poem. Regards // paul

May 6, 2017 at 7:26 PM

It is. I noted that on the lyric. Thank you Paul.

Andrea Dietrich

May 4, 2017 at 8:39 PM

I agree with Joseph, great depth and emotion too, Charlie!

May 4, 2017 at 9:56 PM

Thank you Andre.

May 3, 2017 at 8:42 AM

So much depth in this short verse..Great write Charlie.. A7

May 3, 2017 at 9:57 AM

Thank you Joseph...

May 2, 2017 at 4:48 PM

very emotional write Charlie I really enjoyed your verse:-) hugs Jan xx

May 2, 2017 at 7:49 PM

Thank you Jan...

May 2, 2017 at 4:36 PM

Beautifully done Charlie...I can feel the loneliness in your verse...all the best... ^WW^

May 2, 2017 at 7:49 PM

Thank you WW...

April 30, 2017 at 4:46 AM

Beautifully written Charlie. Very emotional piece. 7+

May 1, 2017 at 12:02 AM

Thank you Maria...

April 28, 2017 at 5:03 PM

Oh so very sad, Charlie, and beautifully written.

April 28, 2017 at 8:31 PM

Thank you Agnes...

April 28, 2017 at 1:48 PM

Such despairing thoughts, Charlie, and yet so eloquently written.

April 28, 2017 at 8:30 PM

Thank you Lin...

April 28, 2017 at 12:30 PM

I agree, this is sad and yet so well written. It reaches the reader with such fine expression :)

April 28, 2017 at 12:54 PM

Thank you Heidi...

April 28, 2017 at 11:13 AM

Such a sad and lonely feeling piece Charlie, but so well written. Short and deep and very emotive. I really liked this my friend.

April 28, 2017 at 12:55 PM

Thank you Chris...

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