Alone

Tickets are not easy to get at the Royal Circle. 
A lady does not wish to get a seat by currying favor; 
the flavor will eventually turn rancid and ruin her day. 
The scent of expensive perfume pervades the warm air.
A packed house of coiffed women in evening frown
and men who wear success like a badge; she is here alone 

in full regalia: pinned-up auburn hair, porcelain skin 
in a buttoned-up dress.  White opera gloves, her nod to 
convention.  Several eyebrows raise when she comes 
unescorted. There is not much legroom and it cramps her style, 
yet, she bears the discomfort one hundred feet above the ground. 
She doesn’t get to see clearly the emotions on the actor’s face. 

The rest of humanity looks like buzzing bees and butterflies 
hiding gossiping lips on pale faces behind colorful fluttering fans. 
She assumes the look; men have no monopoly on the stoic face. 
An evening out unescorted teaches her the world will always 
judge not just the melodrama she is watching onstage. 
There is more to life than The Salon; a woman has a choice. 



After:  Theater by Mary Cassatte 1879


For Debbie Guzzi's Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting 6 
Kim Patrice Nunez
13 January 2016

* Published by Ekphrastic: Writing and Art on Art and Writing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/15/2018 9:04:00 AM
Hi Kim, a lovely write.
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Date: 2/27/2016 7:16:00 AM
In imagery and word usage alone, this poem is nothing short of magnificent. Add to it the message, and it's stunning. Beautiful work, Kim.
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:48:00 PM
Wonderful! Beautiful images and metaphors. I love the ending
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Date: 1/17/2016 4:00:00 PM
A beautiful and descriptive offering, Kim, where the final line sums up what you were leading up to all along. Nowadays a lady (in many countries) can go unescorted to such places, but in those days it was unheard of. ~ Keep up the good work...you're doing just fine:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:01:00 AM
Ah...very good point. It takes a certain amount of luck to end up in a situation where one is judged more by the inside and a little bit less by what is on the outside.
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Date: 1/16/2016 10:12:00 PM
Hello Kim ... it takes courage to stand outside the fire but it also shows strength that not everyone has to conform to a society that appears unfair. Another fine poem Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 1/16/2016 8:09:00 AM
I take pleasure in reading your gems.... I always intrigue whenever I read you. Thanks for sharing dear Kim. You're a wonderful and talented poet, hope you don't mind me using the word 'hugs' ____lol! Hugs!
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Date: 1/15/2016 11:06:00 PM
That is poetry! Loved this.
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:35:00 AM
Great write Kim... best wishes...
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:12:00 AM
excellent write Kim, you're so creative
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Date: 1/14/2016 6:56:00 AM
Kim, that some message and the lines are really awesome.. =`) just lately i've had time and fallen behind.. =`) galing kabayan!! winks! hugs and smiles,~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:33:00 PM
wow, this is GOOD writing, Kim. You are so talented. This one strikes a chord in ME. I go to movies all by myself all the time. Joe thinks I am crazy and hates me doing it Well, he won't go with me. So what's a girl to do??
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