Alone

Scary
             Frightened
             Watchful
             Coldest
             Not even a single kid is here
             The room is black, no one is at home
             I stay so still, not daring to roam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 19, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Yes you are alone and do a wonderful job describing the feelings associated with it. Nice write Rachel
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October 19, 2015 at 8:25 PM
You summed up the title pretty well, Rachel. I might only suggest that the first four lines be offset, only to not lead the reader to think that this is an acrostic. Great write, but I would try to make those first four words out of the context of the feelings you give so well below them.
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