Alone


Delicious love poems
Full of delight and  passion
Words to remember
My poem flows with loneliness
He never loved me


For the Sad Tanka contest

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Poet Destroyer A

December 21, 2012 at 10:28 PM

Barbara, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 31, 2012 at 6:50 AM

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment on my poetry Barbara. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

Robert Johnson

October 29, 2012 at 12:32 PM

The empty sadness with no home. Awaiting new love for a poem. He never loved her, I don't know. A muse like this makes the ink flow.

Andrea Dietrich

October 27, 2012 at 5:59 PM

didn't this make the list? ARe you kidding?

Annie Lander

October 10, 2012 at 7:33 AM

pondering thoughts with this one good luck with the contest

Jack Ellison

October 9, 2012 at 8:40 PM

Such a sad last line! Good luck in the contest Barbara! Hugs, Jack

Sara Kendrick

October 9, 2012 at 5:49 PM

That one is sad..I felt the pain..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara

Annie Lander

October 9, 2012 at 5:42 PM

Good luck with the contest

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2012 at 2:22 PM

oh, my, now this is wonderful. This could describe my sad one as well. What will I do now that you have done this? haha. Will have to put it another way!!!