Alone

I really don't like being alone
why didn't I know the time would come
at parties, feel out of place
and was a terrible disgrace
to talk to the married men there
who initiated them, to my dispair
I saw nothing wrong talking 'fish'
even offered tidbits of advice
like catching a nice five pound bass
what more could one ask
her opinion of reeling one in
however, their wives did not hear
stared at me while they drank their beer
drew their own sad conclusions
along with delusions
so, alone is where I was this year
Oh, maybe next year will be different
might find a companion, it's true
but, either way, I'd just have to say
alone, doesn't make me blue....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 21, 2012 at 8:50 PM
a deep poem,, Polly,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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January 1, 2011 at 6:41 AM
Good stuff Liz
Mehta Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 5:06 AM
Nice expressions you have penned on loneliness. polly. Happy New Year
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January 1, 2011 at 12:39 AM
Polly exactly, my tone, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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