Alone

i was alone watching, a thousand trains leave a thousand platforms behind
caught in a storm, whistling a furious tune in curious concert with my mind
leaves fell far from fall, grass lost its spring
a parched, picket fence bawled beside a rose-less bushes' sting

amidst all this a rusted swing swayed without cause
beside the murderous perch of crows and their 'caws' 
atop a gazebo
that someone stopped painting long ago

waiting for the return of a sun
that was somewhere beyond
too many grey skies to care
and I remember just standing there

beside an empty railroad track
hoping that final sigh that escaped me might bring you back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 1:58 PM
I love your imagery in this poem. Congrats. Andrea
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest Gerry. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 2:08 PM
I think this is a powerful write, Gerry. Congratulations!
Muzzey Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your win with a very nice sonnet. Caryl
Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Many congratulations Gerry, on your win in Larua's fine contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 7:31 AM
I can picture you standing beside the railroad track waiting for your love's return. Congratulations on your success in Laura's contest! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
Williams Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 9:50 AM
A mood captured prefectly... and if you are English.. doesn't it always rain at moments like that.
Parish Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 9:13 PM
Very good write Gerry. Yes, once someone is gone that we love we wished they'd come back. Been there.
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