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Alone

In her prison of sterile bricks of grey In the stark street of emptiness You will find her Gripping her hands To wring the life from them Her deeply wounded face hung in lines and gaps of misery and uncertainty With eyes salted by the conflict of feelings Emanating from her defenseless heart In a chair well-worn with worry She sat drained of life Slumped by the weight of her meaninglessness Powerless and alone September 6, 2019 I feel this poem captures the spirit of human loneliness in its portrayal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/6/2019 10:04:00 PM
how cruel life can be, how lonely and abandon it can become, how strong the spirit to endure
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/7/2019 11:49:00 AM
Completely enjoy your comments Frederic. I like the fact that you give the content a revival! Lonna
Date: 9/6/2019 9:40:00 PM
Wow Lonna stunning writing, enjoyed!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/7/2019 11:50:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I truly appreciate your appreciation. Lonna

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