Almost Xanadu

Winged mannequins dot the forest trail,
forest fairies in the dale -
so lifelike in their chalkware skin,
unexpected in the vale.

Stumbling under their glossy gaze,
lost inside a leafy maze -
I back up slowly, turn and run,
clawing through the morning haze.

"Join us", they plead now - reaching, falling,
all of them so sweetly calling
"You need some flowers in your hair",
as I am gasping, crawling. 

"You could be one of us", they sigh,
"abandoned here we know not why,
creating almost Xanadu -
we never have to live or die."

At wood's green edge I glimpse the street
and glance back, oddly incomplete:
I see just pallid mannequins 
posed stiffly in the summer heat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/22/2023 6:52:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this marvelous poem, Angela:-) I enjoyed it!
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Date: 7/22/2023 6:31:00 AM
"I see just pallid mannequins posed stiffly in the summer heat" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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