Almost Xanadu - First Place Contest Winner

Written: June 14, 2023

Pick-A-Title, Vol 37 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 
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Amidst the rolling hills and verdant green, Lies a land of arcane, almost Xanadu if seen. A place of ariose where dreams are born, And the sun rises each day as an auric crown. In this Elysian land, time seems to stand still. Worries and troubles fade away, as if by will. Here, one can find peace and tranquility. The beauty of nature is its canorous serenity. Glory in magenta and gold hues in the sky The birds emit an opera of tunes as they fly. The aroma of fresh flowers floods the air. Trees soar high, their limbs rising in a blare. Going upward, I have faith in my heart. Through gloomy slopes and twisty parts. The peaks are starting to come into sight. Their tops were aurified with golden light. I wander through this nebulous land of bliss. And fathom a sensation of perspicuous peace. I realize that I have embedded my idyllic place, An oasis of diaphanous passion and grace. Almost akin to Xanadu, an island of dreams. It motivates me with whispered schemes. The seal of the blessing of a utopian paradise A realm where loveliness is eternal never dies.
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Date: 8/1/2023 12:52:00 PM
Lasaad, congrats and kudos for your win taking us into an enchanted place of golden skies and operatic birds where "loveliness is eternal never dies." So beautifully spoken dear friend! This is an amazing reflection of your ability to transport us into enchantment. Sending you blessings of "zanadu!"
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Date: 7/22/2023 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations friend on your well deserved first place win for your lovely poem.
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Date: 7/22/2023 6:16:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this magnificent poem, Lasaad:-) Vivid imagery throughout!
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Date: 7/22/2023 6:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edward. Much appreciate your reading, placing, and commenting on my poem. Best regards dear friend.
Date: 7/22/2023 5:59:00 AM
A very beautiful scene is brought in with all-natural beauties and wonders. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/15/2023 6:43:00 AM
Beautiful poetry my friend. A thrilling ride on the wings of your imagination. Splendidly done. Among your best, Lasaad. A FAVE.
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Date: 6/15/2023 2:21:00 AM
Wow, I feel as if I have landed in an Arcadia ! Wonderful descriptions of scenic landscape and eye capturing sights and scenes. Here Nature marvels in beauty ! I can predict this is going to be a top winner .Straight into my FAVE
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Date: 6/14/2023 11:16:00 PM
Could you give me the address please? I could not think of a more splendid place to be. You have rested my body, delighted my mind, and calmed my inner being with such idealic feelings of harmony and pleasure.
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Date: 6/15/2023 8:07:00 AM
I am genuinely elated that you enjoy it, my friend. I deeply appreciate your remarkable words, as they truly uplift and inspire me.
Date: 6/14/2023 3:47:00 PM
Nice . Im on vacation as I read along with these words. I have walked some of those paths to this Xanadu....
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