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Almost On the Edge of the Map

Almost on the edge of the map Standing on the sand holding her board watching the wave and tide she knew no matter how far out she went she’d have to come back this way here be dragons here be dragons the sun sitting on the horizon gleaming shimmer like a vikings hoard a golden koi swimming tail flicking on its side here be dragons today’s promise almost spent and frayed here be dragons plunging out towards the heart at the end of the day here be dragons she knew no matter how far out she’d have to come back this way here be dragons

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/19/2024 8:15:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 7/10/2022 6:29:00 PM

"Here be dragons" like the gong in an ashram, it resonates within. Great poem! Elizabeth McCann

Bryan Newbey
Date: 7/17/2022 6:25:00 AM

thank you ! i’m really glad you like it , there’s a photo of quite an interesting sunset that sort of inspired part of the poem , i think i’m going to have to become a premium member to post it , i might just do.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 6/15/2022 4:56:00 PM

Wonderful "Here be dragons!" Thus will I conquer all enemies, internal and ex.