Nancy Jones Poet Rhyme

Almost a Hutain

I don't really try to fit in
not that it often matters
but when people are next of kin
and glare like I'm the mad-hatter
it makes my thoughts all scatter.
Then not knowing what to say,
(“No explosions, dear Lord”, I pray)
I go and empty my bladder.

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Nette Onclaud January 4, 2012 at 8:08 PM congrats sistah on making it to the first round of TPS contest..wow!.. thanks for your coment on my "bronchial" piece.. what kinda mint is that?? :) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown January 4, 2012 at 6:33 AM Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Nancy. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2011 at 6:20 PM Love the title of this fun poem that has got you into round two of the Big Soup contest. Congratulations, Nancy.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 27, 2011 at 3:14 PM Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Nancy. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr. September 26, 2011 at 8:49 PM Congrats Nancy on "Almost a Hutain" being featured. You can choose your friends. Relatives are appointed. Vince

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 25, 2011 at 11:59 PM Congrats Nancy on your featured poem this week on PS..luv..

Sidney Beck July 30, 2011 at 6:45 AM me like this too.....

James Peranteau July 28, 2011 at 6:04 PM Witty write dear poet, I'm happy that I found your writes ! Have a beautiful week Nancy ! Much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown July 28, 2011 at 2:55 PM Wonderful creative writing today Nancy. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

Susan Buchel July 27, 2011 at 10:12 PM looks like a Hutain to me, but then I don't know anything! Clever!

Susan Buchel July 27, 2011 at 10:11 PM looks like a Hutain to me, but then I don't know anything! Clever!

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2011 at 10:07 PM hahaha you sound a bit like me, I am constantly emptying mine. I won't even go into a movie or any other show without first using the bathroom! as for doppleganger, it is someone that looks very much like you!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 27, 2011 at 10:00 PM cool and clever write Nancy..good luck in Nette's contest luv..