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Almost a Hutain

I don't really try to fit in not that it often matters but when people are next of kin and glare like I'm the mad-hatter it makes my thoughts all scatter. Then not knowing what to say, (“No explosions, dear Lord”, I pray) I go and empty my bladder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2012 8:08:00 PM
congrats sistah on making it to the first round of TPS contest..wow!.. thanks for your coment on my "bronchial" piece.. what kinda mint is that?? :) huggs
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:20:00 PM
Love the title of this fun poem that has got you into round two of the Big Soup contest. Congratulations, Nancy.
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2011 8:49:00 PM
Congrats Nancy on "Almost a Hutain" being featured. You can choose your friends. Relatives are appointed. Vince
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Date: 9/25/2011 11:59:00 PM
Congrats Nancy on your featured poem this week on PS..luv..
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:45:00 AM
me like this too.....
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:04:00 PM
Witty write dear poet, I'm happy that I found your writes ! Have a beautiful week Nancy ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/28/2011 2:55:00 PM
Wonderful creative writing today Nancy. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:12:00 PM
looks like a Hutain to me, but then I don't know anything! Clever!
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:11:00 PM
looks like a Hutain to me, but then I don't know anything! Clever!
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:07:00 PM
hahaha you sound a bit like me, I am constantly emptying mine. I won't even go into a movie or any other show without first using the bathroom! as for doppleganger, it is someone that looks very much like you!!
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:00:00 PM
cool and clever write Nancy..good luck in Nette's contest luv..
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