Allusions

Swim above light your gift will lather you with sweet blood but Bare your mean frantic friend and leave to deliriously Luscious sweet skies in our vision of true love together...

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/6/2012 5:52:00 AM

This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/30/2012 5:26:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Andrea. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/29/2012 9:48:00 PM

great pen.

Karen Deeks

Date: 5/29/2012 5:24:00 PM

Hello Andrea.. this is the first time i have seen this style of writing poetry.. i googled it and think i understand the concept and some oof the guidelines now..I found this so interesting and mind opening ... i enjoyed the obscurity yet still believe i see a picture of floating romance .. i found the word (to) most intriguing as reading aloud i found myself playing with all the potentials to too two as if read aloud to another soul to me it would leave that twist... i hope im not totally barking up the wrong tree .. so to speak.. karen