Alluring

Autumn’s allure adds an awareness 
as ancient Aspen’s amber aura alights all around. 






Written on 10/23/2019

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Funom Makama

Date: 11/15/2019 8:33:00 AM

Amazing! Amazing! So amazing. So deep, my senses are pulled out to tick a yes in every line. Great work friend.

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2019 10:03:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments and am happy you liked this, Funom! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/6/2019 1:32:00 AM

You have penned an alliterative masterpiece in this one.

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/6/2019 8:33:00 AM

Thank you, Caren! You are too kind :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/31/2019 7:26:00 AM

WOW...that was some poem. So nicely done, Laura, and not at all forced. Beautiful!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/31/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Eileen! So good to hear from you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2019 4:52:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/31/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2019 9:37:00 PM

A mountainously great write, Laura. (Can't believe that's actually a word; didn't even get a red line underneath it. LOL.) Sounds better than the Alps... Congrats on your win in Eve's contest. Warm wishes, Gershon

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/30/2019 11:29:00 PM

Thanks very much, Gershon! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/30/2019 9:05:00 PM

You painted a beautiful picture I could see. Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/30/2019 11:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Eve! I enjoyed it very much! :)