Alluring

Autumn’s allure adds an awareness 
as ancient Aspen’s amber aura alights all around. 






Written on 10/23/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Amazing! Amazing! So amazing. So deep, my senses are pulled out to tick a yes in every line. Great work friend.
Leiser Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments and am happy you liked this, Funom! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 1:32 AM
You have penned an alliterative masterpiece in this one.
Leiser Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Caren! You are too kind :)
Manassian Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 7:26 AM
WOW...that was some poem. So nicely done, Laura, and not at all forced. Beautiful!
Leiser Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Thanks so much, Eileen! So good to hear from you! :)
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 4:52 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:37 PM
A mountainously great write, Laura. (Can't believe that's actually a word; didn't even get a red line underneath it. LOL.) Sounds better than the Alps... Congrats on your win in Eve's contest. Warm wishes, Gershon
Leiser Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Thanks very much, Gershon! :)
Roper Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:05 PM
You painted a beautiful picture I could see. Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Eve! I enjoyed it very much! :)
Neumann Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai
Leiser Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Kai! :)
Horn Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Anxiously abiding anticipating always alone.
Leiser Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:07 PM
Good one, James! :)
Aurora Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 6:11 PM
An A for Awesome Alliteration :)
Leiser Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Thanks so much, Midnight! :)
Ligon Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 1:06 PM
This is my favorite so far of all the contest entries I've seen. I hope it's a winner.
Leiser Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Thank, Juliet! So glad you like this! :)
One Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Wonderful use of alliteration young lady .
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 7:30 AM
- Nice one, Laura :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! :)
Lawless Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 7:10 AM
I'd give this and .......A
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Yay! Thanks, John! :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 9:02 PM
Well penned, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
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